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    Default Please Offer Your Opinion

    This was our first BlueVoda publication.

    www.ezhoneymoon.com/index.html

    We already found three mistakes in the right column that need correcting.
    1. 5-step registry has a space in #1.
    2. The yellow bed photo is not centered
    3. The bottom photo did not load

    Please let us know if you see any more errors for us to correct.

    Thanks,
    Tim and Sonia

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    I think it's very nice except that all windows open in a pop up window I would like too see it open in the same window other then that it's very touching and nice.

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    Hi Tim & Sonia,
    Ditto re the pop-up windows +

    Step 1:
    The funds can also be withdrawn for whatever purposes you need them for - no need for the 2nd. "for".
    Honeymoon Wishes link doesn't work :(
    Is it really supposed to be Step S & not 8?? & I think you mean Blunder not Plunder, yes!!

    Didn't really have time for a deeper look but I wouldn't expect to find too many other "errors" LOL as it is a nicely done site :)
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    HI Tim and Sonia,

    I am grateful to you for giving me the opportunity to understand why you considered my use of the English language on my site, gave me the appearance of being an “uneducated amateur” and why Jeff thought English was not my first language.

    I had a quick look at the first page of your site and immediately understood that the application of English grammar and spelling is obviously very different on your side of the Atlantic.

    Our ‘rules’ would never allow the use of a comma, or semicolon before the connective ‘and’ (e.g. “….so many details to plan; and, one important detail…”, “…numerous honeymoon websites; and if you’re like us…” etc.).

    Your (US) spelling of certain words also appears to be different e.g. traveling (your site) would be spelt travelling (UK) and preexisting (your site) would be spelt pre-existing (UK) etc. and using phrases like “empty newlywed cottage” etc. would not be acceptable over here (UK).

    Please accept my apologies for not having a more in-depth look at your site, but I do not feel qualified to offer any form of criticism.

    All the best with your work and business

    Newbie
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    Last edited by newbie; 07-21-2009 at 01:03 PM. Reason: incorrect

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