Thread: My new site. Please review.

www.seattleareagroceries.com



Any comments and help welcomed.

Hi, I really like the colours you used and your logo design. The wording Sample List on the front page is so pale you can hardly read it so you may want to use a darker colour. And I was wondering why the free trial page was so different from all the others? Great work.

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Gunn R
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Your site is so happy and inviting!!!

However, I found a few things at a glance.: You should name your title pages something relevant to the page and not 2ndpage. It means nothing to SE so they will not rank you and no one will see your site. the image on your second page is huge! I think the page is getting started (perhaps you should name it that...) it's larger than most pages at 339kb. It may not seen like a lot but for an individual image, but for the web it is. Try to change the size of the image using a pix re sizer to the dimensions you need, not larger and not smaller. download here for free. It via BV and is safe to use.

keep smiling;)

In your getting Started page, the log in and 30 day trial pages are offset. and I too think you should make your trial page similar to the rest. it's a big white offset surprize when it opens. brought me back to the "jack in the box" days - I still have nightmares lol;)

Adir,

Thanks for your comments. I will change the page name. But I am confused about the "Log in" and "30 Trial" being offset. My browser or any other browser I have veiwed them with doesn't seem to have this problelm. Also I see no huge image. And the sign in page is white because I don't know how to change it. I use Sentry Log in. I need to query them to integrate the page better. Again thanks for your helpful comments. J.T.

Page displays vary according to different browsers, which is the reason it is recommended to "proof" you site design by checking the display yourself using IE, FF, and another browser if available. The point is to create a website layout that is optimally viewable in browsers universally.

Just a few points,
Rather than the log-in being a separate page, make it a module on the home page. Also, there is no need for a local website to have a country selection tab. Remove that. People should not have to scroll through the world to find the US; besides, the letters are too big for the space. It looks like, "select your counti"

We noticed, also, the body does not mesh completely with the header. Please take a few moments to smooth out those frayed edges.

On the FAQ page, there is red at the bottom of the page. It would be nice if that was on all of the pages.

On the Home page, the set of links at the bottom should sit just above the 2009 copyright. And, the copyright and links should both be on all pages.

And one more thing, the top of the header's red box is not even across the top with the white.

We do agree with others. You do have very nice color coordination.

I love the images you have used and I love the colour of your site. I think these make it look quite professional. My browser is displaying your font as Times New Roman - have you selected this to be your main font? Personally, I believe Times New Roman takes away from that professional edge, a font such as Arial is much better received.

Just a few print suggestions - your bullet points on the left of the screen have each word capitalised, which makes it a title "Create and Print Personalized Shopping Lists" should look like this "create and print personalized shopping lists". Also, download is one word.

I like where you're going with this site, I'm looking forward to seeing the finished product!