Thread: Please Review Sites

I've just released my two sites, and any feedback would be appreciated.

Thanks in advance.

www.heartofhauden.com
www.paseasholtz.com/blog

you have one site, two domains, and a blog. Not sure what you want me to say. Looks like an Amazon Book club site. Both of your domains point to one site...not sure why you didnt install the blog as the main course in the second one instead of redirecting it about.

Karen

Hi,
You may want to click the 'centre in browser' button on your page properties as your website is over to the left of the screen and not the middle. Good Job.
Cheers
Gunn R.
www.heal-eft.com

Yup, good call on the centering. Thanks much!

If these books have come out and are in the market,
you should have a specific link to the store pointing
to your books. Like for example, Barnes & Nobel or Border
or another chain like that.

If you are selling them through Amazon, then you should
directly be pointing to these books of yours.

Any one reading your pages would expect to see these links
or a shopping cart or paypal or credit card if you decide to sell
them on your own.

Or maybe you can start a chapter a week of all the books
you have for free.

What I mean is there is no business plan showing on these pages
what you wanna do with them.

Or maybe I am missing the whole point you may be making.

Other than that, I think you have a super website.

Karen, not 100% sure I understood exactly what you meant regarding the redirection..however, it got me to thinking that I really did have it backwards. I moved the blog up to parent domain and then redirected the others (there is one more not public yet) into subdirectories. This made it more logical (from my stand point anyway) and will make managing the other domains easier I think.

Thanks for getting me thinking, even if I didn't understand you 100%!

Both sites look very nice; but we're like Shafi - We're wondering what the purpose of the sites are. If it is self-advertising, where do you buy, and for how much? If you want to share your work, offer it in some logical manner (Shafi suggested a chapter a week).

I agree with the direction stuff above.

I like your sites visually though, the only thing is that the writing is too small. Just one size up would make for easier, less stress on the eyes reading!

Got the font up a size. Thanks for that suggestion as it was a bit small.

Regarding the "purpose" of the site as questioned above, I will have the links to Amazon once I have that final information. Still looking around Thanksgiving for the release date. This was basically to get it out for feedback, much like what has been provided here. (And the Newsletter is "live", so I wanted to get the sites out there.)

Added a background image to give the pages more "depth" - think it meets my goal of providing something other than plan white while not over-powering the text and images.

Earn money at your home & Find your ultimate tips & tricks.

I like your websites they have nice colors. Are you the authur of these?

keep up the good work

Yes, I am the author.

Thanks for the feedback.