Thread: I did a complete redesign....your comments are appreciated

Hello,

The first website I built for my company was my first attempt at ever building a website. Now that I have learned some things, I wanted to redo my website and make it better, more like main-stream websites. I would appreciate any comments or feedback you have for my new site.

www.profitandlasvegas.com


Thanks in advance!

I like your colors. I think this text looks like it should be links with the texed being underlined and they are not.

Honest ~ Accurate ~ Punctual

Your large images that are links for the services, payroll, and business formation, don't have an underline in the text. Just my two cents.

Hi Jeff,
Home page: "Important Changes For Business Owners" overlaps the first line of the main text
Services: at the very bottom of the page the last 2 lines that end in Contact Us could be lowered a tad?
Formation: How do I get the courage to just do it??? This really should be written "just to do it" (it's called a 'split infinitive which is grammatically incorrect ) Under the Pricing you could lower the actual sums more to be in line with the service
History: With this wide range of knowledge and a very diverse background - "very" is not necessary.
Pricing: when business owners hire employees. And why is the list of additional cost duplicated?
To be accurately quoted a price
Contact Us: back to you - rings better :)

otherwise - really well done,
david

Would be worth keeping a watch on your image sizes. IE:
http://www.profitandlasvegas.com/bv01163.png is over 1000kb & should be around 30kb.
http://www.profitandlasvegas.com/Accounting%204.jpg is 200kb & would be better around the 20kb mark.
http://www.profitandlasvegas.com/P&L...ransparent.png Although not that large, the image could be reduced to 25kb with software & it would also loose a bit of the distortion that is created with using the image blue handles.

Hey Jeff,
Your site looks much better than before. We see the site is much more uniformed, which makes it look much more professional. We would suggest one more modification - apply a uniform font style and size to all pages. Main titles should be the same on all pages, all sub-titiles should be the same as other subtitles on other pages, and all text throughout the site should be the same too.

Hey there,

The site looks great, I like the background color since it's easy on the eyes. But I must agree with the others that states that if you underline some words, people will expect it to be a link. So I would remove the underlines if they are no connected links. Keep it up, improving a website is really an endless task.