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    Hi my fellow Vodahosters, please can review/critique this website
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    adams place Kalkan
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    Nice job.

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    Very nice work, all your sites look well organized and attractive.
    I especially like the expanding photo box you have used and will
    try to figure out how you did this. I don't believe my old version
    of BV has this option!

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    Quote Originally Posted by WSBlue View Post
    Nice job.
    Thanks WSBlue :)
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    Quote Originally Posted by marciemayer View Post
    Very nice work, all your sites look well organized and attractive.
    I especially like the expanding photo box you have used and will
    try to figure out how you did this. I don't believe my old version
    of BV has this option!
    Thanks Marcie, I used the BV lightbox for the photos. Its been around a while now so you should have it. :)
    Happy Building

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    Hi Darren,
    great job as usual..........BUT, no-one's perfect.....you: almost LOL
    only 2 teeny little things:


    Location: Adam's Place Location and
    Menu:
    Adam's Special Hot Cheese
    funny how they're similar errors, eh? :)

    david

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    Quote Originally Posted by ahimsa View Post
    Hi Darren,
    great job as usual..........BUT, no-one's perfect.....you: almost LOL
    only 2 teeny little things:


    Location: Adam's Place Location and
    Menu:
    Adam's Special Hot Cheese
    funny how they're similar errors, eh? :)

    david

    Cheers mate. I was hoping you'd take a look. You're the best spell checker I know :)
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    yw ...
    Never measure the height of the mountain you're climbing. At the summit, look back and see how small it really is!

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    Attractive site.....

    Some comments.

    Tulle is still very much in charge of the kitchen.
    Most of the produce used, including (as well as) some of the
    meat, is grown by them and the remainder purchased
    very carefully (selectfully ...maybe?) in the local area.

    Is meat "grown"? Possible a difference in UK/US syntax??

    To me it would read better:
    Most of the produce used is grown by Tulle.
    Some meat and produce is carefully selected from local sources.

    Deliberately constructed (located..??) out of the over crowded village and to (delete and to & insert we) we provide a more tranquil atmosphere in which to dine. The Restaurant is approximately 3kms away on the main road to Kas.

    We have visited Kalkan since 1991. and (delete and as a run on sentence) Adam's new
    location is absolutely superb...He collected us from
    CarbonTerry
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    Still green...still mean......just not as lean

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    Quote Originally Posted by CarbonTerry View Post
    Attractive site.....

    Some comments.

    Tulle is still very much in charge of the kitchen.
    Most of the produce used, including (as well as) some of the
    meat, is grown by them and the remainder purchased
    very carefully (selectfully ...maybe?) in the local area.

    Is meat "grown"? Possible a difference in UK/US syntax??

    To me it would read better:
    Most of the produce used is grown by Tulle.
    Some meat and produce is carefully selected from local sources.

    Deliberately constructed (located..??) out of the over crowded village and to (delete and to & insert we) we provide a more tranquil atmosphere in which to dine. The Restaurant is approximately 3kms away on the main road to Kas.

    We have visited Kalkan since 1991. and (delete and as a run on sentence) Adam's new
    location is absolutely superb...He collected us from
    Cheers CT, much appreciated :)
    Happy Building

    DarrenC

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    yw
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    Still green...still mean......just not as lean

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    Zone 5 Photo
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