Thread: First attempt - only 3 pages so far - feedback?

Hi
This is my first attempt at a website. I have only three pages published so far while we work on the rest. Any comments gratefully accepted.

www.mintlawvets.co.uk

Yep...Looking good.

You could embed the google map into your page by using the generated code given and pasting it it into a html box. Follow this link http://maps.google.co.uk/maps/empw?u...ed&hl=en&gl=uk

ditto + only typo I found was this:

The classic Kong chew toys are a great way to keep your dog amused

on your Products page......well done & good luck,
david

OK .... did you go out on strike?
We've been waiting to see your next phase of development for some time now ....

Hi there,
Don't like the fonts you are using, specially the one in the menu bars: home, directions, the nurses, products.

Good luck!

Hi Vasili, not on strike lol, just been really busy with work and not much time to get things done. More soon, promise!!

Originally Posted by Donnasangster

Hi Vasili, not on strike lol, just been really busy with work and not much time to get things done. More soon, promise!!

Starting to sound too much like me!

Ditto with the menu font not looking very clear. Would also go through most of your images & resize them to the size you want on the page to help with fast loading & to remove the distortion on some of them.
Would loose the dental image on the Nurse page to something more appealing, maybe the http://www.mintlawvets.co.uk/images/...x%20600%29.jpg image.
If you do resize your images correctly, it would be a good time to give all the images a SE friendly name that would be used in a search. IE: instead of "bv01141" as an image name, it could be "dog dental check" with a good alt text to help.

Off to a good start, good luck.

I like it!

I think on the Products page you could move things round a bit, you start the products with a wide left margin, then you've moved into the left hand side more further down. Maybe have a juggle and start more to the left from "Pet Head" so you don't have the problem of not fitting in the pics and text.

Nice clean site though, easy to navigate. I agree with changing the teeth picture, isn't there a cute picture somewhere of a dog having it's teeth brushed? :)