Thread: Online Dance Studio Website & Cart Review

I'm in the process of designing a Online Dance Lessons website and would appreciate your comments & crits.

This one also makes use of Navaldesign's great PayPal Shopping Cart.

Very nice indeed!!

Originally Posted by PapaBiker

Thumbs up! A new look for an older service ... should breathe some new life into the business ....

Thanks PapaBiker

Hi Andrew,
seems like you keep having customers who don't check their text?
Found this on the front page & there are a few more dotted throughout the site......sorry lol
Are you being left behind on the dance floor

otherwise....up to your usual standard: nice
david

Originally Posted by ahimsa

Hi Andrew,
seems like you keep having customers who don't check their text?
Found this on the front page & there are a few more dotted throughout the site......sorry lol
Are you being left behind on the dance floor

otherwise....up to your usual standard: nice
david

LOL Thanks David,

The client is Afrikaans (similar to Dutch) and I found loads of errors. Maybe it's time for fresh eyes to proof.

Thanks,

Lovely site. Easy to navigate. Spell check my friend...

Very visual and easy to follow.

"Dance students are able to choose the dance they like..."
perhaps
"Dance students are able to choose the style they like.." or

"Students can choose the style they like"... would be perfectly in context and understood.

I personally find the first paragraph a bit awkward becuase the word dance is used so many times.

I agree with narobe.

Dance Acceleration offers comprehensive online dance lessons, dance videos and dance tutorials by professional dance instructors. With the help of cutting edge technology, Dance Acceleration will cater for all your dancing needs. Dance students are able to choose the dance they like, select the level at which they are comfortable learning, read the user friendly dance tutorials and watch professional, easy to understand dance videos. You can learn to dance online today.

could be written as

Dance Acceleration offers comprehensive online dance lessons, videos and tutorials by professional instructors. With the help of cutting edge technology, Dance Acceleration will cater for all your dancing needs. Students are able to choose the dance they like, select the level at which they are comfortable learning, read the user friendly tutorials and watch professional, easy to understand videos. You can learn to dance online today.

Should
Dance Acceleration will cater for all your dancing needs.
be written as
Dance Acceleration will cater to all your dancing needs?

Then again English is not my first language.

Should
Dance Acceleration will cater for all your dancing needs.
be written as
Dance Acceleration will cater to all your dancing needs?

Correct lol

Thanks for all the spelling & grammar checks.