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    Default First time website build... am I right to be happy with it?

    http://www.scubatechphilippines.com

    First timer.... for my scuba tech phillipines site.. would love any feedback you can spare.

    There is a few pages still under construction, but there shouldn't be any dead links.

    Thanks in advance

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    I would suggest creating some manner of establishing a "page" layout, especially when using black or darker colors as both background and body, if to at least comply with minimal Construct standards .... there simply is not enough for the SE's to distinctly distinguish what constitutes "Main" content from disparate elements and for them to 'read' intentional relationships to disassociated text for any relevance to be emphasized and valued fully: it is not the SE's job to "decipher" artistic design and fill in the blanks when it comes to scoring a build.

    Offering some manner of page margins will overcome this ambiguity for both Visitors (whose initial impression is more likely noticable via the lack of contrasting areas of emphasis, let alone the overly contrasting visuals of Content text and images) and the SE's via the establishment of defined "grouping" and normalcy of textual Content presentation. Like it or not, when text colors are too close to background color (lacking contrast) or are too s harply contrasting (white on black - the opposite of "normal" black on white) they value such in the same manner in which they determine "spoof" sites, "hidden text" (a flag for penalization), or simple "non-conforming" (non-compliant, which triggers closer scrutiny overall).

    Using such page establishment might also help you re-organize some of your smaller elements for better spacing and layout completion .... some things are unbalanced and simply too close for a professional look overall, IMO. (i.e. the smaller icons in top-left header area vs. other areas they could be placed, or in a different, more "flowing" manner).

    Something to think about, using a Page ....

    Otherwise, you seem to have demonstrated a good idea of how to begin establishing navigation, simple META development, and Content development (depth of Content is better than breadth).
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    Default Re: Download/recover pages from server hosting?

    Might be a good opportunity to have a revamp of the site. You are using quite a few images that will mean nothing to the SE's without a lot of extra help.IE:http://www.scubatechphilippines.com/images/Finished%20Logo%20v.2%20(sized)_02.jpg is not a good name as not many will enter "Finished%20Logo%20v.2%20(sized)_02" as a search in their browser. Might be a lot better named as scuba-philippines.jpg With an alt tag of Padi scuba diving lessons.
    Also it not good to have text within an image as the SE's cant see this at all. (Sample)
    Your keywords are repeated through out your sites pages & are also not always within the textual content of the pages. IE:

    You are using your Keywords as follows in the body of your page:

    scuba 90 times Good, do nothing (Some se's might think a little excessive)
    diving 35 times Good, do nothing
    philippines 71 times Good, do nothing (Some se's might think a little excessive)
    technical 15 times Good, do nothing
    wreck 8 times Good, do nothing
    holiday 1 time Good, do nothing
    vacation 0 times Add to your web page text
    subic 21 times Good, do nothing
    bay 18 times Good, do nothing
    anilao 7 times Good, do nothing
    batangas 0 times Add to your web page text
    manila 0 times Add to your web page text
    tech 98 times Good, do nothing (Some se's might think a little excessive & also relates to a lot of other things)
    tek 0 times Add to your web page text
    tec 103 times Good, do nothing (Some se's might think a little excessive & also relates to a lot of other things)
    padi 11 times Good, do nothing
    ssi 2 times Good, do nothing
    bsac 0 times Add to your web page text
    course 16 times Good, do nothing
    shop 0 times Add to your web page text
    padi specialty diver philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba instructor philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
    philippines dive shop 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba lessons philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba diving lessons philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba certification 1 time Good, do nothing
    learn to scuba dive philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba diving class 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba diving training 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba diving shop 0 times Add to your web page text
    master scuba diver 1 time Good, do nothing
    master scuba divers 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba diving classes 0 times Add to your web page text
    scuba diving certification 0 times Add to your web page text
    certified scuba lessons 0 times Add to your web page text
    certified scuba diving lessons 0 times Add to your web page text
    certified scuba diving training philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
    technical dive courses philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
    technical diving course philippines 0 times Add to your web page text
    what is technical diving 0 times Add to your web page text
    dsat tec program 0 times Add to your web page text
    tec deep 0 times Add to your web page text
    tech deep 1 time Good, do nothing

    Only some idea's if you have to rebuild the site.

    Good luck.

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