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    Smile Check out my new wesite, and let me know what you think!?

    This is my new website it a free restaurant directory, just after some general feedback about the whole feel of the site...does it appear ok on your browser, any spelling mistakes?
    Thanks AW

    www.eatingnorfolk.com

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    Quote Originally Posted by ash.whitehair
    This is my new website it a free restaurant directory, just after some general feedback about the whole feel of the site...does it appear ok on your browser, any spelling mistakes?
    Thanks AW

    www.eatingnorfolk.com
    It looks good and displays perfectly for me. All the links that I tried worked properly. Good notices on unfinished pages. I didn't spot any mistakes but I am not the best as checking for them. Lol.

    Nice site, great idea, well done.

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    Default Re: Check out my new wesite, and let me know what you think!?

    Looks very nice - the idea is good and the lamb chop makes me wonder where madam is - not in the kitchen I'll bet.

    Sorry that Norfolk is in the UK - my Norfolk (next door) in in Virginia.

    Good luck.

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    ddstiles,

    Looks really nice. It appears you have a very good idea here- I hope it pays off for you.

    Caution- I would look into the liability issue with posting reviews. A competitor might just be mean enough to post a negative review letting you hold the bag for turning people away from a restaurant. Also- If I were considering advertising my business with you and you had no quality control set up with respect to how reviews are verified- It just might diswade me from signing up.
    Just a thought.

    As far as sight design - very nice.

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    Nice design and layout. I didn't see any typos in what I read and all the links I used worked great.

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    Great looking site and nice idea. Here are the few incorrect spellings I could find. On your About Us page, dont should be don't in 2 places. On the same page,...we charge resturants a very small charge to have there (should be their). On Suppliers page, benifit, should be benefit. On Reviews page, 2nd sentence ...warn people way!? (not sure what this should be) On Recipes page - resturant to take park (should it be part). And also ...this would usually cost a one off of (again, not sure what this should be).

    Some of these may be the trans-atlantic version that girlonthehill told me about, but again...I'm not sure. Anyway, hope I helped a little and good luck with your site. Looks super!!
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    Hi ...great site...mouth watering visuals and easy to navigate. I agree with Floor LAdy on corrections and I also noticed that there seems to be a little overlap of your search box at the top. It maybe my browser or just me butI thought you might want to check it out.

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    Hi everyone,
    Thanks for all your feedback, I will correct all the spelling mistakes! Im a terrible typer! :(
    Thanks,
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    Default Re: Check out my new wesite, and let me know what you think!?

    Hi there, thank you for taking the time to view my site...does the overlap say 'powered by freefind'?
    what size is your browser?
    Thank,
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    Yes, but on my browser, after the page loads, your search box covers it up. If I do a refresh I see "powered by freefind" for just a moment. I use IE6.
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    Very nice indeed.

    I did notice one small typo on the 'about us' page 'freinds' but perhaps you've caught that already.

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    Great site! yummy photo!

    On your links site is the very best way I have seen yet to say "under construction" !!!! One tiny thought on it change 'later' to 'soon'.
    I hope I can borrow your phrasing on my undone pages.

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    Smile Re: Check out my new wesite, and let me know what you think!?

    Hello again everybody,
    once again thanks to everyone that looked at my site, I think ive got all the typos now!?!?
    Feel free to borrow anything.
    If anyone notices anything else please please please let me know - I love all the feedback everyones so helpful!
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    I agree with everyone, very well done. Good Luck
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    Hi Ash,

    Very very tastefully done there !! Can't see anything that is obviously not right...

    Makes me salivate...haha

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    Quote Originally Posted by ash.whitehair
    This is my new website it a free restaurant directory, just after some general feedback about the whole feel of the site...does it appear ok on your browser, any spelling mistakes?
    Thanks AW

    www.eatingnorfolk.com

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    Default Re: Check out my new wesite, and let me know what you think!?

    Looks good, and really easy to read and understand. All the links work properley that I tried. Good Luck
    p.s thanks for the feedback on my site

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    Smile Re: Check out my new wesite, and let me know what you think!?

    I've recently created a quick website for the Restaurant where I am a manager. On my pc and my laptop it displays perfectly. However some people are saying they can't view it properley. If you would be so kind please check it out for me and let me know what you think...

    Thanks in advance

    www.timbershotel.co.uk
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    Timbers Hotel looks good but does have problems with mediuim font sizes overlaps areas of smaller fonts: HOme page and Rooms especially. Photographs are also overlaying the text.
    On the Nav Bar I would be consistent in the use of capital letters: The food to The Food, events to Events etc.

    All in all a very attractive site. Good luck.

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    On your salon page check the spelling of bridal.And on the bar page Player has an extra t.

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    Smile Re: Check out my new wesite, and let me know what you think!?

    Thanks for looking guys. I think I might change alot yet anyway so theres lots of time to improve it.
    The bar is acutally called 'Playters Bar' but thanks for noticing anyway.
    Once again thanks.
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