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    Dear All,

    Pls check my site www.parkeler.com and give mr yr commet.

    thanks much

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    Hi,

    It looks great but you might want to check your links. I can't read it but good luck.
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    Quote Originally Posted by toprakbey
    Dear All,

    Pls check my site www.parkeler.com and give mr yr commet.

    thanks much
    I think you've done really well. There are a couple of things I would give a little extra thought to: I don't think you need to highlight the text, as you have, with the yellow and red - it looks a little untidy; the main photo on you homepage - the quality seems a little off - a little blurred; I found one link that wasn't working (but can't remember its title, sorry). I cannot read the language you have built your site so can not offer any spelling or grammar advice, lol.

    Very well done and, I think, with a few little tweeks it will be beautiful!

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    I have to agree with Girlonthehill, I found that the last three links didn't work, your email one and the two above that. But your colors are nice and not jumping out in my face. As I know with my site, every bit of advice from people in here is a great help. Good luck, and job well done.

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    Hi

    The site has a clean look to it, however some of the links don't work. Good luck! I'm sure as you go along the site will look very good.

    Michellene

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    Site looks great nice colors. Just curious what is the site about and what language? The only thing I would add would be a end to the page. I call it a copyright bar ... basically a line at the bottom that tells our brain/fingers to stop.
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    I don't understand the language but your E-mail form is not working properlly. It gives me an error once I "Gonder"

    Try ro chake you color layouts.

    All the best!

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    I could tell what the site is about by the pictures - and they are great pics - but you should add the alt tags to them.

    Same as the others about the links.

    I'm not real fond of the choice you made for the scroll over on your menu - as that blue doesn't really fit your sites colors.

    Tweaking a bit and you'll have it in great shape.

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    My kind of site!!! Flooring, Yippee. Looks good, but I do agree with the others comments. Also need to title your pages in the browser bar. Love all the pictures of the wood floors. Good Luck! P.S. What language is it? Just Curious.
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    Hey thanks much all of you, You all make me happy,it is realy nice to hear something for what you done , it is positive or negative, My site langauge is Turkish, my English is not so good therefore for give me for some mistake during writing pls.

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    Your English is WAY better than my Turkish would be - as I would probably be in trouble if I tried to nod a hello :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bethers
    Your English is WAY better than my Turkish would be - as I would probably be in trouble if I tried to nod a hello :)
    Isn't it fun all the culture that BV exposes us to.
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