Hello all

foxyandhunter · #1 11-14-2006, 06:57 PM

Well firstly i have worked in bv for a while and have shifted myself over to play around with Dream weaver and to date the site has a launch it will probably be tweaked many times over but this is it
Please be aware that this site is adult content and is strictly for over 18's only so please observe this if you are under age or offended by adult material do not go there but if you are ok with it i could also do with feedback
the site is not just a main stream porn site it is amature content and it is a personal site

thanks guys

Scribbler59 · #2 11-14-2006, 09:01 PM

Hi,

First, overall I think your website looks good. I like the index page -- a nice design. Now to specifics:

- I am personally not a big fan of "comic sans serif" which I think is the font that you've chosen to use. I think it tends to look sort of childish, but this is probably just a question of personal taste.
- on your home page there are a few odd spacings between lines. Maybe consider keeping the line spacing the same in the paragraph that's in white.
- Oh, I liked the "spaces are tight" ... a "nice" play on words.
- I don't think the photo you've chosen for your home page is the best -- I'm pretty sure you could find better amongst your collection of photos.
- The link to "Serious Naughtiness" on the home page doesn't work.
- Your entry to the members section is nicely done. The photo on each of the categories of photos is just large enough to "titillate".
- The Gallery's great. I like the album generator you used. The photos aren't of "professional quality", but they're still very good -- and that "good quality, non-professional look" is actually kind of cool. There's one photo that needs to be rotated.
- I find it a little odd that your sub-head is "Independent Escorts and Content Providers" ... maybe keep it as independent escorts and keep the content provider part as a link? (and note the spelling it's "independENT" -- "ant" is the French spelling -- and it's "Providers" -- without the apostrophe.)
- And you might want to run a quick spell and grammar check, there are some misc. things.
- oh and you might want to resize the photo of "Hawk" on the right side of his page. It got stretched and it's kind of scary -- and I believe he's a good looking guy!
- I didn't go through your other sections as they seem to still be mostly under construction.

By your main site looks very good!

Hope this is helpful

Cheers,
Scribbler59

naghosthunter · #3 11-14-2006, 10:01 PM

well can't see link to view so cannot make a comment.

VodaHost · #4 11-14-2006, 10:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scribbler59

Hi,

First, overall I think your website looks good. I like the index page -- a nice design. Now to specifics:

- I am personally not a big fan of "comic sans serif" which I think is the font that you've chosen to use. I think it tends to look sort of childish, but this is probably just a question of personal taste.
- on your home page there are a few odd spacings between lines. Maybe consider keeping the line spacing the same in the paragraph that's in white.
- Oh, I liked the "spaces are tight" ... a "nice" play on words.
- I don't think the photo you've chosen for your home page is the best -- I'm pretty sure you could find better amongst your collection of photos.
- The link to "Serious Naughtiness" on the home page doesn't work.
- Your entry to the members section is nicely done. The photo on each of the categories of photos is just large enough to "titillate".
- The Gallery's great. I like the album generator you used. The photos aren't of "professional quality", but they're still very good -- and that "good quality, non-professional look" is actually kind of cool. There's one photo that needs to be rotated.
- I find it a little odd that your sub-head is "Independent Escorts and Content Providers" ... maybe keep it as independent escorts and keep the content provider part as a link? (and note the spelling it's "independENT" -- "ant" is the French spelling -- and it's "Providers" -- without the apostrophe.)
- And you might want to run a quick spell and grammar check, there are some misc. things.
- oh and you might want to resize the photo of "Hawk" on the right side of his page. It got stretched and it's kind of scary -- and I believe he's a good looking guy!
- I didn't go through your other sections as they seem to still be mostly under construction.

By your main site looks very good!

Hope this is helpful

Cheers,
Scribbler59

How can you write such a in depth review, this person did not provide a link to his/her site? You must be very gifted.

LadyEye · #5 11-14-2006, 10:46 PM

lol voda host ... the link to her site is in her profile .... you can find it there ...

I agree, scribbler gave a very good lengthy review ... I believe she knows her stuff

Scribbler59 · #6 11-14-2006, 10:52 PM

Vodahost. "Gifted." Hm. Thank you. Except the only thing I've been gifted with is lots of hair -- thank goodness since I've ripped 1/2 out of out doing dumb things with my website.

Ladyeye's correct, I just sneaked a peak at her profile.

Cheers,

LadyEye · #7 11-14-2006, 10:53 PM

I think you have done very well with your website and couldn't find anything wrong, scribblers gave you a great review and I'd take her word for it ... good luck to you, you know what you have sells!!

VodaHost · #8 11-15-2006, 01:14 AM

Sorry...I should known to check the profile...(silly me) The "gifted comment" was due to the fact that you gave an EXCELLENT review to a site that did not have any visible link....I actually went back and read the first post 3 times looking for a link and thinking i was going blind or something...

Bethers · #9 11-15-2006, 02:14 AM

I just glanced - but first thing I noticed was a misspelling that's also in your above post - amateur - not amature.

The page titles need to be utilized to describe the page people are on, also.

foxyandhunter · #10 11-15-2006, 08:00 PM

Thanks for some very good words all,

i will get my spell checker going lol but at least we wasnt slated totally so we are all big smiles guys ta

naghosthunter · #11 11-16-2006, 06:27 PM

aye me too voda me too.not on gifted, but on link in profile. :)

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