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Customer Website Reviews - Your Testing Ground Are you ready to show your website to the world? Are your hyperlinks working?, Do you have any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors? How does it look? How can it be improved? Have your website reviewed and critiqued by other VodaHost Community Forum Members. DO NOT BE SHY!!! We want to see it , we are here to help each other. This is your testing ground.

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Old 11-22-2006, 09:00 PM
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Default What do you guys think? Review my site please

Let me know what you think first site I ever built, any suggestions, comments would be appreciated ...thanks

www.paidmaternityleave.com
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Old 11-22-2006, 09:08 PM
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Default Re: What do you guys think? Review my site please

First attempt??? Extremely good!!

Two pointers:

Centre your page by going into page properties and ticking in the box that says "centre in browser"

Secondly, your page title Paidmaternityleave... seperate the words as this is what the search engines read first when visiting your site so as one word won't mean anything to them.

Otherwise very very nice!
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Old 11-22-2006, 09:11 PM
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Default Re: What do you guys think? Review my site please

site looks good - you might want to center your page though - just the one page right? you might not want to underline words as then they look like links - just bold or italics should do
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Old 11-22-2006, 09:12 PM
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Default Re: What do you guys think? Review my site please

thankyou guys I appreciate your help
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Old 11-22-2006, 09:28 PM
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Default Re: What do you guys think? Review my site please

Very Nice
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Old 11-22-2006, 11:01 PM
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Default Re: What do you guys think? Review my site please

Your form is not validated. I didnt enter any details in the contact form, clicked on submit, it went straight to the thank you page.
Click the following link:
http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/forms.html
This will help you to learn more about using php coding to validate the form. Other than that, the site looks really great!
Feel free to ask if you require any help.
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Old 11-22-2006, 11:08 PM
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Default Re: What do you guys think? Review my site please

Very nice - but - who can sign up. You say "Now available in Massachusetts" - how about other states? If you are only available in certain areas, you need to make that very clear.

Again, it says provided by licensed state agent - for what state?

The layout would work better if you made the left column end at the same place as the right - or put something else in the space that is available there.

Remember your meta keywords can only be words ON THE PAGE. Not words you want to be found for. The se's really don't use them - but some lesser ones do - however - first thing they'll do is look for those words on your page - and when they aren't there, you could possibly harm yourself.

Personally, I wouldn't contact you without a company name, address and phone number available. I want to see some credibility - as there are hundreds and thousands of sites out there - and I want to know that the ones I contact are legit.
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Old 11-23-2006, 05:31 AM
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Default Re: What do you guys think? Review my site please

I agree with all of the above about centering the pages and the area you are more working with.
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