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Customer Website Reviews - Your Testing Ground Are you ready to show your website to the world? Are your hyperlinks working?, Do you have any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors? How does it look? How can it be improved? Have your website reviewed and critiqued by other VodaHost Community Forum Members. DO NOT BE SHY!!! We want to see it , we are here to help each other. This is your testing ground.

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Old 12-19-2006, 08:13 PM
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A simple page, but do take a look. any feedback would be useful.

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Old 12-19-2006, 10:32 PM
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Just a comment - all caps is considered shouting - your entire home page is in caps - it works for emphasis here and there - like bolding - but not for all text.

Also, the lighter blue text is harder to read - and you need some variables - all the boxes look the same - nothing to bring my eye to one or another.

I'd like to see some sort of header - and some headlines on the page. The page itself needs to either be aligned to the far left of the screen or centered on the screen - not haphazard in between :)

Good start - I look forward to seeing where you go with it.
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Old 12-20-2006, 06:16 AM
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Wow, that page took forever to load.
Agree with Bethers, very hard to read.
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Old 12-20-2006, 12:01 PM
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i couldn't agree more with bethers.

DO NOT USE ALL CAPS EVERYWHERE IN UR WEBSITE.

NEVER.
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Old 12-20-2006, 12:02 PM
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but yeah, ur have a good design layout.

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Old 12-20-2006, 06:50 PM
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Yup take the advise from beth she knows what she talking about trust me she and the rest helped me on my ghost hunters site .
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Old 12-21-2006, 06:57 PM
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Listen to Beth
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Old 12-23-2006, 06:46 PM
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Hi everyone thanks for the info. Yep not sure why I did the whole site in upper case. I have made some changes, and am playing around with the rest. Not sure why it took so long to load, or why the page is off centre, as it looked and loaded ok on my PC, but I will look into it. Thanks again.
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