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Customer Website Reviews - Your Testing Ground Are you ready to show your website to the world? Are your hyperlinks working?, Do you have any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors? How does it look? How can it be improved? Have your website reviewed and critiqued by other VodaHost Community Forum Members. DO NOT BE SHY!!! We want to see it , we are here to help each other. This is your testing ground.

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Old 06-18-2007, 10:33 PM
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just got it finished...

www.bodyforlifemassotherapy.com

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Old 06-18-2007, 10:52 PM
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Hi there,

I like your site. Easy to read. I've checked all the pages and I think you should center them all.

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Old 06-18-2007, 11:21 PM
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What a nice site. The colors are soothing, and the text is quite easily read.
Except for the infant massage page, which is in a different font for some reason.
This site is full of good information, clearly stated and well presented.
Good work, and good luck.
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Old 06-18-2007, 11:59 PM
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Looking real good. As Nzbr noticed the pages would look better centred.

Good luck.
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Old 06-19-2007, 12:12 AM
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Hi Boo,

The text block in the centre of your pages appears to be to small and the text therefore overlaps.

Instead of repeating your links path in the 'alt text' of your nav bar, rather give a 'keyword rich' description of the buttons/links.

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Old 06-19-2007, 02:43 AM
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Pamela: Very, Very Nice. I don't see the overlapping that Beer talks about. I do agree with changing your alternate text on your nav bars to something more inviting. Great picture of you on the home page. Very good and relevent information. Fee's stated clearly, benefits, etc. All is GREAT! You have done a wonderful job. At this point you may want to do some search engine optimization. Bethers has some excellent points that you can find in my signature line below. Good luck and YES!!!! MASSAGE'S ARE GREAT!!!
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Old 06-19-2007, 03:35 AM
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I don't see the overlapping that Beer talks about.
Boo,
The front page looks much better with the text now fitting into the background block. Have a look you seem to have lost the centre alignment on the page.

Failed to mention earlier: "You've got a good looking site, which is easy to get around" Well done.

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Old 06-19-2007, 09:30 PM
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Lovely site. Excellent choice of color and tone. Best of luck to you!

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