My first offical site......I open for help

rockycusa · #1 06-21-2007, 12:50 AM

This is my first real web site. Ive messed around with a few pages before tryin to figure things out.......So any help would be nice, I've tried to design it for adsense.
rockycusa
www.brook.meigsonline.com

LadyEye · #2 06-21-2007, 02:54 AM

Overall pretty good job ,... kudos to you ...

You need to center a few of your pages ... lol on the snow on May 24th - Only in Canada ...

You need a few apostrophes in your scrolling on the index page - that's and I'm in the sentence - Now that's what I'm talking about.

You might add fishing after some of your page titles - like you have them called, lake, stream - consider lake fishing, stream fishing, - might do you a little better with seos -

Good job, no problem loading, easy to navigate ..

I am having trout for dinner tomorrow ..

I didn't catch it though, lol ... but I remember my first mud sucker I ever caught, on a safety pin, string and a wooden pole, lol ...

Happy Fishing, it's quite popular around here ...

rockycusa · #3 06-21-2007, 11:15 AM

Thanks I'll make them changes this morning.........i've also caught many a fish on a saftey pin when I was young..........lol
rockycusa

whiteshepherd · #4 06-21-2007, 11:48 AM

I agree with Lady Eye ... congratulations on your website ... now as for catching fish on a safety pin can't say I have ever tried ... but my old German shepherd used to have fun chasing them in the river and actually caught a fish in the shallows one day ... he got such a surprise he dropped it and it swam away ... lol ...

SAman · #5 06-21-2007, 07:44 PM

Great site. The pics at the top of the pages are beautiful. but I kept looking for a pic or something to come up next to the first part of the text.
I just got a white space. Those Brookies, and the lake trout are alot of fun to catch. Keep up the good work.

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