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09-05-2007, 11:01 AM
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please leave your comments or ideas you have i know it looks boring but im not very imaginative so any ideas would be great.thanks in advance, sc06tty www.easyincome24-7.com         |
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09-05-2007, 01:38 PM
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You need a proof reader. You have no gaps at the end of each sentence. No gaps after any period etc etc. You might also want to remove the 'I'm filthy Rich' bit as that will probably have the opposite effect of what you are trying to say... and sorry but it's just too tempting NOT to ask... If you ARE filthy rich what are you doing making websites like this sharing this apparent get rich schemes rather than sunning it on a luxury yacht somewhere? I know I would be? P.S. You don't actually have to answer this question... I've asked another 300 people the same question before! Otherwise, nice site honest.
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had problems viewing my new page but here it is 
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