Flair magazine are calling this an anti aging miracle...

btimlin · #1 11-21-2005, 09:12 PM

Hello Vodahost Brothers & Sisters,

I wrote about anti-aging first because it is THE most
important health topic to be addressed. Why? Because
it is a major factor in so many other illnesses: cancer,
heart disease, arthritis, alzheimers, etc. What they call
the diseases of aging.

It is also very important of course to length and quality
of life. What if this could make you look and feel as
much as twenty younger?

The Holistechnology Secrets Of Anti-Aging is available
now on...

http://www.thetruthaboutantiaging.com

Don't you deserve the best out of life?

Sincerely

Brian Timlin

Ps. Flair magazine described just one of the anti-aging
secrets in this book as a 'bone fide miracle'

btimlin · #2 11-21-2005, 10:03 PM

I can't seem to edit my post. I re-read it after it was posted. Sorry there are some proofreading errors and words which shouldn't be there etc.

xdigimaster · #3 11-21-2005, 10:07 PM

too troublesome to be read...........

btimlin · #4 11-21-2005, 10:26 PM

What you think the website is too long?

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too troublesome to be read...........

VodaHost · #5 11-21-2005, 10:52 PM

its ok now

Julie S. · #6 11-21-2005, 11:05 PM

Holy moly! I couldn't bring myself to read all of that either! I didn't even make it to the end of the first page, much less read the second after clicking as a "woman".

Personally, I think there is too much "building up" to what you are selling.

Just my opinion. =)

Julie S.
www.hanalynn.com

btimlin · #7 11-21-2005, 11:22 PM

You could be right Julie, it is a strong marketing principle though to tell the person everything about what you are selling. If somebody is interested in buying something they will want to know everything about it. For example, if you were looking for a car and say for arguements sake that the only way you could buy was from a written ad with no picture... wouldn't you want to know everything you could about the car before buying it?

My only worry is that i didn't keep it simple enough. Too long is not a problem judging the most impressive selling websites.

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Originally Posted by Julie S.

Holy moly! I couldn't bring myself to read all of that either! I didn't even make it to the end of the first page, much less read the second after clicking as a "woman".

Personally, I think there is too much "building up" to what you are selling.

Just my opinion. =)

Julie S.
www.hanalynn.com

btimlin · #8 11-21-2005, 11:27 PM

Thanks,
i am impressed with your service and in general. I had real problems with my last host and left very quickly, the site crashed when i did a joint venture with somebody who sent me alot of visitors. The internet is a right quagmire to learn i find... you just have to learn as you go i guess. It's hard at the start, so thanks for creating an easy system,
Regards
Brian

Ps. i'd have like to have been able to edit my own post if possible?

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Originally Posted by VodaHost

its ok now

VodaHost · #9 11-22-2005, 12:16 AM

There is 15 minute time limit on editing posts. After 15 minutes you are locked out.

btimlin · #10 11-22-2005, 01:02 AM

Hi Julie,

I had a look at your site. It's pretty.

Brian

VodaHost · #11 11-22-2005, 01:20 AM

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Originally Posted by btimlin

Hi Julie,

I had a look at your site. It's pretty.

Brian

I agree.

Julie S. · #12 11-22-2005, 01:26 AM

Hi Brian -

LOL! =P Well, thanks for the compliment on my site.

Long drops and dangles, big chandelier earrings and hoops are very "HOT" right now... don't ya know? ;)

Julie S.
www.hanalynn.com

M Burns · #13 11-22-2005, 01:39 AM

Play Nice...Both of you!!! I will not edit again!

Julie S. · #14 11-22-2005, 01:58 AM

HEY!!!

What happened to our FUN banter! It was all in good fun! You cut out the best parts! =P

As far as I know, we were both playing around!

Julie S.

Gina · #15 11-22-2005, 02:07 AM

Yeah Burns, you old fart! I was having fun reading the exchanges....So far on
the one side we have droupy ears and on the other a snake oil sales man. Get
back to it guys.

Gina · #16 11-22-2005, 02:09 AM

I afraid to post my url now...just joking about the snake oil.

M Burns · #17 11-22-2005, 02:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Gina

Yeah Burns, you old fart! I was having fun reading the exchanges....So far on
the one side we have droupy ears and on the other a snake oil sales man. Get
back to it guys.

Old Fart ehhh? eeeeeeexcellent.... I now know who I am going to have fun with next.

btimlin · #18 11-23-2005, 02:29 AM

You really need to lighten up man. We were just having some fun.

I saw your full post Julie. I was just on my way out, so I didn't have time to reply.

By the way I am aware that the big earings are in fashion... in fact some men will even pay just to be with a woman who wears large earings. :)

I won't be buying any of your earings myself. However, i will recommend your site to family and friends. You SEEM to be very talented. Either that or you collect Christmas cracker gifts and scrub them up a bit.

I just want to tell you aswell that when i looked into your eyes i saw something very beautiful... it was my reflection,

Brian

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Originally Posted by Julie S.

Hi Brian -

LOL! =P Well, thanks for the compliment on my site.

Long drops and dangles, big chandelier earrings and hoops are very "HOT" right now... don't ya know? ;)

Julie S.
www.hanalynn.com

btimlin · #19 11-23-2005, 07:42 AM

I just revamped my website. The headline was too long, complex and therefore clunky. It probably confused people right from the off.

See what you guys think now: http://www.thetruthaboutantiaging.com

Brian

Julie S. · #20 11-23-2005, 07:41 PM

Well, I suppose your reflection is so beautiful because you have all of those anti-aging miracles at work. ;)

I'll be sure to refer my friends and family to your site when they are having trouble getting to sleep. (hehe)

JUST KIDDING! (REALLY, I AM)

I like the flow of your site much better now. Not sure exactly what you did, but it seems nicer to read now.

Also, I certainly understand that you want to give as much information as possible so that people have no doubts about wanting to place an order.

Maybe I should order your item... let's see... 20 years younger would have me at about 15 years old. YES! It would definitely be nice to look 15 again! ;) Ahhh yes... how simple life was at 15 and I didn't even know it. (..sigh..)

In all seriousness, nice job on your site. =) Very detailed, and I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors just scanning through. Not to mention, you are selling a very highly sought after product. All the best to you!

Julie S.

leigha · #21 11-24-2005, 12:29 AM

You have created a great web site, lots of useful information, will look at it in more detail soon. The only negative thing for me is that you could use some colour and pictures? but other than that superb!
Leigha
www.tigersnowsports.co.uk

btimlin · #22 11-28-2005, 04:37 PM

Thanks Girls. I've done some further work on it. I hope I can leave it alone soon!

Julie I saw your thread. I think the flags are fine. In case I haven't told you, you do some beautiful work. Do you think you could do it full-time? I know of a guy who makes wire sculptures and makes a good living online.

By the way, what the hell is an onyx? That doesn't sound very glamerous to me?

Regards,
Brian

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Originally Posted by Julie S.

Well, I suppose your reflection is so beautiful because you have all of those anti-aging miracles at work. ;)

I'll be sure to refer my friends and family to your site when they are having trouble getting to sleep. (hehe)

JUST KIDDING! (REALLY, I AM)

I like the flow of your site much better now. Not sure exactly what you did, but it seems nicer to read now.

Also, I certainly understand that you want to give as much information as possible so that people have no doubts about wanting to place an order.

Maybe I should order your item... let's see... 20 years younger would have me at about 15 years old. YES! It would definitely be nice to look 15 again! ;) Ahhh yes... how simple life was at 15 and I didn't even know it. (..sigh..)

In all seriousness, nice job on your site. =) Very detailed, and I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors just scanning through. Not to mention, you are selling a very highly sought after product. All the best to you!

Julie S.

Julie S. · #23 11-29-2005, 02:59 AM

Hey Bri-

Thanks very much for the kind words about my work. =) I've been to your site again and read through it in more detail, and you seem very passionate about your subject matter. That's good! =) You've got me curious about your secrets... who wouldn't want to know what secret Nicole Kidman has in regard to staying so young and gorgeous?

As for the Onyx question... it's a gemstone! I use natural gemstones in my jewelry. They are purported to have wonderful healing properties... something you are quite familiar with! ;) So, my stuff is BENEFICIAL as well as adornable.

Here is a great resource for the different stones and their healing uses (Onyx is listed too!):

http://www.beadage.net/gemstones/gemstonesA_F.shtml

Julie S.

btimlin · #24 11-29-2005, 07:51 AM

Hi Jules,

This may be my last post on this forum. The administrator is doing my head in. He's back meddling and editing my posts again. Such censorship hasn't been seen since the days of Stalin. I mean editing conversations, gimme a break. They become his messages. What anus. Have a bit of common sense man.

By the way this is probably also going to be severely edited.

'Beneficial and adornable'... oooh, somebody's getting a bit haughty.

Healing jewelery though. That is interesting. However, your still not going to get me into drag Julie.

Regards
Brian

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Originally Posted by Julie S.

Hey Bri-

Thanks very much for the kind words about my work. =) I've been to your site again and read through it in more detail, and you seem very passionate about your subject matter. That's good! =) You've got me curious about your secrets... who wouldn't want to know what secret Nicole Kidman has in regard to staying so young and gorgeous?

As for the Onyx question... it's a gemstone! I use natural gemstones in my jewelry. They are purported to have wonderful healing properties... something you are quite familiar with! ;) So, my stuff is BENEFICIAL as well as adornable.

Here is a great resource for the different stones and their healing uses (Onyx is listed too!):

http://www.beadage.net/gemstones/gemstonesA_F.shtml

Julie S.

Julie S. · #25 11-29-2005, 08:52 AM

Heya Bri-

Sorry to hear you are having trouble with the editing stuff again. That's no good!

Well, you can always reach me via my web site contact e-mail for more banter. =P

I'd like to keep up on how things go with your site. Plus, I still need to eventually talk you into getting into drag! Come on, you know you want beautifully adorned, droopy ears! It's the "hot thing" these days! =P

(hehehe...)

Keep in touch-
Julie S.

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