Please Critique Our New Site

GDY · #1 12-17-2007, 03:04 AM

Finally after numerous delays our new web site is ready for the world to see. It is not yet 100% complete, but very close (I think).

If you have the time, please look it over and let me know of any improvements or errors you might find.

If you find something you like about the site, let me know that also.

Thank you

Gary

www.parlorroomgames.com

dandia · #2 12-17-2007, 07:34 PM

Gary

Font style are they the same or do they change? About us page looked a different font to the home page.

HTH
Debbie

SChajin · #3 12-17-2007, 07:47 PM

Hi Gary,

Well done from the short time I went through it, looks like a lot of work went into it.

jenjen101 · #4 12-17-2007, 08:12 PM

Gary,

Looks great. Very easy to navigate. A bright and cheerful website. I do copywriting and noticed a couple of writing errors.

for a lot less money then you might think. Should be "for a lot less money THAN you might think.

Create fun and great memories with a Foosball Table. Our great prices and excellent customer service will have your game room up and running quickly, for hours of great times and memories. Used great 3x in a row. I would switch up the adjectives here a bit and use great maybe once. Maybe..."fabulous prices" and "hours of good times and memories."

You did a most excellent job on your website. I can tell you did a lot of work.

Jenny

cheryl20 · #5 12-18-2007, 12:41 AM

Great Job! Very easy to navigage and very informative.

GDY · #6 12-18-2007, 03:49 AM

Thank you everyone for your input on this site. Last thing that needs to be done is plug in our credit card processor and our web site will be fully functional.

Thanks again everyone!

larazovich · #7 12-18-2007, 04:14 AM

Gary -
When viewed in Firefox, there is a spacing issue with your h1 tags - they drop into your text body.
If you read here there are instructions on how to correct that - read post # 4 specifically
great site!

antiihero · #8 12-18-2007, 04:18 AM

great site, easy to find stuff and and good format.

extremecity · #9 12-18-2007, 07:41 AM

Yes, when I view it in fire fox some of your text seems to over lap. Some of your headings overlap your text. But I like your site: Easy navigation, friendly looking and product display looks nice and clean.

joyofdance · #10 12-23-2007, 06:40 AM

Very, very, well done! The pics are all the same size. It is easy to naviagate, even in your links page.

Congratulations!

Joy of Dance

Vasili · #11 12-23-2007, 08:40 AM

Great work!

I want a Razorback, so hurry up and get the CCard gateway set up!
Speaking of bristle boards: most item descriptions mention staple free bulls, but pictures do not lie --- only the Razorback is staple free.

I would consider abbreviating some labels in your Menu buttons, such as "Shipping Information" >> "Shipping Info" just to make them more balanced and professional looking.

A nice site overall......

koolspaces.com · #12 12-24-2007, 12:06 AM

I really liked the page transition effects. You click on an item you are interested in and get directed to the page you want info on. Very nice! But I wonder why you have a "Home" menu button on your "Home" page when you are already, in fact "Home?"

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Vasili · #13 12-25-2007, 08:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by koolspaces.com

I wonder why you have a "Home" menu button on your "Home" page when you are already, in fact Home?"

LOL
It's called "continuity" and what is not only expected, but how solidly designed navigation displays. It also offers visitors a built-in manner to either "refresh" or 're-load' the page to replay an intro, loadable file (like music or video), or re-start a slideshow or other effect if present.

whiteshepherd · #14 12-25-2007, 10:42 PM

congratulations ... well done and all the best for 2008

Andy128 · #15 12-26-2007, 09:30 AM

Very excellent!! Nice piece of work.

Andy

koolspaces.com · #16 12-26-2007, 09:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vasili

LOL
It's called "continuity" and what is not only expected, but how solidly designed navigation displays. It also offers visitors a built-in manner to either "refresh" or 're-load' the page to replay an intro, loadable file (like music or video), or re-start a slideshow or other effect if present.

Then, why not have a menu button labeled "Refresh" of "Reload?"
Call me old-fashioned but when "continuity" obscures logic I'd prefer not to be discombobulated in the process of navigation.

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