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Old 04-01-2008, 11:39 PM
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This website is for my dad's business. It's not quite there yet; still a work in progress. I am open to all suggestions. And I have a couple questions: why is my contacts page opening in a separate window? Can I make the menu items appear bold when you scroll over them?

http://www.advancedfencesystems.com/

Thanks everyone!
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Old 04-01-2008, 11:43 PM
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Hi,

that looks great for a first site. It may be my screen or that I ma seeing the site on firefox but at the bottom where it sais 'emailroger....' the text is not on the same line on some pages. I would check your pages sizes are the same on each page.

all the best

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Old 04-01-2008, 11:45 PM
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Thank you Dave! I should have viewed in Firefox. I will now and make that correction. Thanks so much!!

I should have mentioned, the fence background - not my personal choice, but my dad loves it. So it's there...haha!
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Old 04-01-2008, 11:48 PM
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Hello you are off to a great start, and so far looks really good!!

The reason your contact us page opens in a new window is because in the hyperlink properties window you have probably set the target to 'blank'. The target should be empty, so just delete it, republish, then it should be fine (don't forget to refresh your browser)

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Old 04-02-2008, 12:10 AM
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Thanks Darren. Where are the hyperlink properties?
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Old 04-02-2008, 12:15 AM
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If you double click the contact us button, up will pop a image properties box, where on the link tab you will see the url

http://www.advancedfencesystems.com/contactus.html

Just below that is the 'target' field I mentioned earlier - should be empty.

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Old 04-02-2008, 12:21 AM
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oh yeah you are right, that is the problem. i'll fix that. thanks so much!! wow i'm really glad i posted the site!
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Old 04-02-2008, 02:56 PM
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For a first time out, all that I can say Outstanding job very well done. good luck
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Old 04-02-2008, 05:26 PM
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wow thanks so much jkadin. the credit goes to bluevoda - that made it pretty easy!
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Old 04-02-2008, 07:16 PM
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Very nice, wish you were in florida..LOL The hurricane blew down my fence and had some guy fix it..he wanted cash (Should have known) so he didn't have to pay taxes. Duh, I gave it to him...Fence is falling down now and hurricane season is on the way...Trouble is a coming!!!!
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Old 04-02-2008, 10:37 PM
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Hello, well done site and to the point. One thing that I would change is on the home page. There is a paragraph with two long sentences describing services and types of fences. I would consider revising or perhaps into bullets to make it easier to read or summarize. Good luck.
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Old 04-03-2008, 03:37 AM
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Great point. I will look into summarizing that. I finally finished with the tweaks and it's for the most part the way it's going to be. So those of you who looked earlier, please take another peak if you don't mind!! Any final thoughts are MUCH appreciated! Thanks again!
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Old 04-03-2008, 03:39 AM
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SChajin - so sorry about your fence!! I'm sure my dad wouldn't mind a "work trip" to FL...haha! My thoughts will be with you all during hurricane season!
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Old 04-03-2008, 03:53 AM
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I meant to ask - on the different types of fencing pages (i.e. chain link, aluminum, etc.), do you think I need somewhere on the page to go directly to the different types of fencing pages instead of having to click back or click back on types of fencing from the menu?

Thanks again!
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Old 04-03-2008, 03:50 PM
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Very nice job! One thing, on your "about us" page the first paragraph is in third person, then the nest paragraphs are in first person without quotes. I think the first paragraph would sound better in first person. Looks good though!!!
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Old 04-03-2008, 06:47 PM
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Originally Posted by fisher33 View Post
I meant to ask - on the different types of fencing pages (i.e. chain link, aluminum, etc.), do you think I need somewhere on the page to go directly to the different types of fencing pages instead of having to click back or click back on types of fencing from the menu?

Thanks again!
From an undecided buyers perspective maybe it would be friendlier to "have a small link of each type on each fence type page". Now say that 10 times. LOL But it looks good how it is already.
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Old 04-04-2008, 01:06 AM
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i dont really know
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Old 04-04-2008, 02:32 AM
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Thank you SAman and Aerowalker. I will use your suggestions. What don't you know Darthcnn?

Thanks again everyone!
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