Tell Me What You Think

frediabowers · #1 05-05-2008, 12:43 AM

This is my first website I have created from stratch. Please take a look and tell me what you think of it. Tell if my links are working and what you think my layout. Tell what improvements I can make to my website, www.naughtybasketssstore.com. Do you have any ideas about advertising with little or no money. Just a little warning my site contains adult products and novelties!!

lemmondr · #2 05-05-2008, 01:01 AM

Fredia,

You and your daughter have a pretty good start here. I would put a Form on your Contact Page. I would come up with a different coloer scheme...(pink is nice..but you have too much)..it doesnt really work with the Grey Menu Bar. Spell/Grammer check your FAQ, it looks pretty rough.

Your About Us I feel should like below:

The Naughty Baskets Store is an online store for anyone looking to put a little spice back into their relationship. We feature adult novelties and adult novelty Gift Baskets upon request. We are a small Mother and Daughter team that started out making adult novelty baskets for our friends and family. We found we enjoyed it so much we have taken our joy of making novelty baskets to the internet. We hope you’ll let us put the same care into your basket and take Naughty Baskets along for your special occasion.

Best of Luck!

Daniel-

lemmondr · #3 05-05-2008, 01:05 AM

Hey Gang!

Here's the proper link http://www.naughtybasketsstore.com/

Daniel-

PlayItByBeer · #4 05-05-2008, 11:36 AM

Hi frediabowers,

Naughty but nice site LOL and a fun site to post a review on...

The link below your 'rabbits' is hidden behind the bar
There is a hidden link (www getmy...) behind the bar below your logo.
Page Titles - Have a look at Beth's great SEO ebook
The 'pink on pink' coloured links are difficult to read.
I don't think the top 'nav buttons' fit the rest of your page IMO have a look at the loads of other color variations or you can make your own by color picking from your own page.

Cheers,

PlayItByBeer · #5 05-05-2008, 11:49 AM

Back again...

The above mentioned link below the "rabbits" is dead (the page you saved in BV has capital letters and link is small letters)

Cheers,

zuriatman · #6 05-05-2008, 12:11 PM

I was under the impression that VodaHost does not permit
such sites on their servers?

VodaHost TOS

Quote:

"2.4) Adult Sites

Due to various legal and moral implications. VodaHost does not permit sexually explicit material on any of its servers."

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