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Customer Website Reviews - Your Testing Ground Are you ready to show your website to the world? Are your hyperlinks working?, Do you have any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors? How does it look? How can it be improved? Have your website reviewed and critiqued by other VodaHost Community Forum Members. DO NOT BE SHY!!! We want to see it , we are here to help each other. This is your testing ground.

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Old 05-14-2008, 01:23 AM
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Smile Please review my site

It would please me to have you all review my site.

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Old 05-14-2008, 01:34 AM
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Hi pedsam,

You have a very good looking site, pleasent at first sight.

Just a few note:

- you should center all your pages at same place. When we go trough all your site, there is an oscilation between them, because they aren't placed evenly.

Good luck to your site.

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Old 05-14-2008, 02:12 AM
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Welcome Pedro,

A couple of comments to consider:
  • your home page template is stretched to the right compared to your other pages
  • the action link seems to be a form response page (???)
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Old 05-14-2008, 07:04 AM
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Hi Pedro,
i see you solved the problem with the images (well done) Sites looking great & real easy to navigate. Can only see one tiny thing. The header image has a different url on each page & is a little large @ 250kb for a header image, so tends to slow down each page on 1st time loading. How did you put this image on the page???
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Old 05-14-2008, 09:46 AM
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Lightbulb Site Needs Attention To Basics!

Yes, as mentioned, you have created a "Menu" item with your email form 'action' page .... clearly a disconnect with the concept of how to create a proper email function. I would suggest a very slow and careful re-reading of the instructions.....

Secondly, some others have mentioned some of the obvious tech issues, but the thing that caught my attention quite rapidly is the quantum shift from the 'first impression' (no matter the degree) to a sudden lowering of standards that should be present in a "business-oriented" website: never use the colloquilism "cool" in any manner whatsoever! Even if you are trying to keep things "light" and current-sounding, it is something that telegraphs a dichotomy that becomes too in-credible to ignore .... makes you look like you are reaching too high, or are posturing rather than proudly presenting......(in my opinion, of course!)

And, be very sure about the Contact information you publish on the internet: it is best to keep addresses and telephone numbers commercial rather than residential --- for obvious reasons.
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Old 05-14-2008, 02:57 PM
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Hi pesam,
This is a clean looking site, but the pages don't look centered, the home and cantact pages are too wide and look off. On the "2." item I think you ment to say know, not known. did you use the handles on the pic to fit it in, it looks a little squished. this is just my view on it. Good luck!
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Old 05-14-2008, 05:08 PM
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Nice looking site
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Old 05-14-2008, 07:33 PM
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Thanks for the critique.
The image was place on the page by downloading it to my computer and then copy and paste.
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Old 05-15-2008, 12:28 AM
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Default first sentence

You need to change this:
"We are a web based company that markets the opportunity of making money at home we have a business opportunity with low cost start up fees."

This is a run on sentence. Make it 2 sentences.

You should consider more content.

Good luck



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