hi guys...this is my first project for my client using BV but not finished yet. I build with BV but the menu bar and banners i create in flash 8, just to experimental. Need your comment. Here the temporary url. Thank you

http://demo.bluelemonstudio.com/

You have made a good start, I love how your 'links' move in when the first page opens. I also like the fact that you can turn the music off if you wish to, although this has to be done on every page visited.
You need someone fluent in English to check your grammar and spelling.
Good luck

patsy121105>>... thanks for your comment patsy121105. Yeah my english is not good enough and ofcourse i'll find someone good in english.

Your site looks good and then the turnoff about us staff area and contact comes up 404 error those links are not working other than that good job get those links working.

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jkadin... thanks for your comment...for your information this site is under construction... i just publish three section for now (home,service and products..but its not complete yet)..and the others is under progression. :). Thanks again

great flash header
sound switch...off is spelled with 2 f's
"read more" redirects to a non VH web hosting page ?
for shame, Ha!
great start, clean, corporate, easy navigation and eye catching.

Nice site so far, needs tweeking. You defiantely need someone to go over your text, so many spelling, gramatical and structure mistakes. I also am not a fan of having the music on every page, yes you can turn it off but it get a bit annoying. Love the flash elements, very nice. Nice layout, clean and good flow. Once the tweeks are made the client should be very happy.

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> journey462001,...actually this site is under construction. That's why some links/navigation do not work. The reason i publish this website with temporrary domain is to get your suggestion to improved it. The "read more" i put a linked as www.yoursite.com. (i mean yoursite for yourdomain acctually). So maybe it's redirects to a someone URL. Thanks for your comment.

> D'son,... yeah, english is my problem. Don't worry i'll find someone to help me. I thinks what you say is true, maybe i should put a music at index page only..not all page. I appreciate your comment. Thank you

Excellent looking site. Very professional & clean. Very good choice of colours, and not too over cluttered with text.

The only thing that lets it down is the grammer & spelling, but I guess you know that already.

Otherwise an excellent looking site.

> rangaz007...Thank you. I appreciate your comment. I hope all comments can make this website better before i show to my client.

very catchy, clean and crisp. i like it other than the already pointed out errors. very professional looking.

> onionpai.. thanks a lot. :)