I did a complete redesign....your comments are appreciated

profitandlasvegas · #1 10-06-2009, 08:47 PM

Hello,

The first website I built for my company was my first attempt at ever building a website. Now that I have learned some things, I wanted to redo my website and make it better, more like main-stream websites. I would appreciate any comments or feedback you have for my new site.

www.profitandlasvegas.com

Thanks in advance!

motoxxx · #2 10-07-2009, 09:07 AM

I like your colors. I think this text looks like it should be links with the texed being underlined and they are not.

Honest ~ Accurate ~ Punctual

Your large images that are links for the services, payroll, and business formation, don't have an underline in the text. Just my two cents.

ahimsa · #3 10-07-2009, 09:17 AM

Hi Jeff,
Home page: "Important Changes For Business Owners" overlaps the first line of the main text
Services: at the very bottom of the page the last 2 lines that end in Contact Us could be lowered a tad?
Formation: How do I get the courage to just do it??? This really should be written "just to do it" (it's called a 'split infinitive which is grammatically incorrect ) Under the Pricing you could lower the actual sums more to be in line with the service
History: With this wide range of knowledge and a very diverse background - "very" is not necessary.
Pricing: when business owners hire employees. And why is the list of additional cost duplicated?
To be accurately quoted a price
Contact Us: back to you - rings better :)

otherwise - really well done,
david

Collectors-info · #4 10-07-2009, 09:54 AM

Would be worth keeping a watch on your image sizes. IE:
http://www.profitandlasvegas.com/bv01163.png is over 1000kb & should be around 30kb.
http://www.profitandlasvegas.com/Accounting%204.jpg is 200kb & would be better around the 20kb mark.
http://www.profitandlasvegas.com/P&L...ransparent.png Although not that large, the image could be reduced to 25kb with software & it would also loose a bit of the distortion that is created with using the image blue handles.

indytnt · #5 10-11-2009, 07:31 PM

Hey Jeff,
Your site looks much better than before. We see the site is much more uniformed, which makes it look much more professional. We would suggest one more modification - apply a uniform font style and size to all pages. Main titles should be the same on all pages, all sub-titiles should be the same as other subtitles on other pages, and all text throughout the site should be the same too.

Hylith · #6 10-12-2009, 06:15 AM

Hey there,

The site looks great, I like the background color since it's easy on the eyes. But I must agree with the others that states that if you underline some words, people will expect it to be a link. So I would remove the underlines if they are no connected links. Keep it up, improving a website is really an endless task.

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