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sapikest · #1 10-08-2009, 05:04 PM

let me know what yoou guys think heres the link

Vasili · #2 10-08-2009, 06:46 PM

With the many grammatical errors and improper word usages, your site falls short of the professional presentation I believe you intend ... especially when confronted with a "Survey" pop-up asking visitors to rate it! Try to compose your Content in Word first, alowing the SpellCheck and Grammar Tool to proof it for you: in this case, you can simply copy your content directly from your BV page into Word to see the errors highlighted for you to correct before re-pasting back onto your BV page to be re-published.

Your site need not be complicated whatsoever, but attention to the most common of details is the absolute miniumum when the very purpose of a website (to effectively communicate digitally) is carelessly faulted in addition to the many 'missing' core page elements or attributes.

wysiwyg4 · #3 10-08-2009, 06:49 PM

1. You could make the title unique for every page per
the content or business of the page.

2. Have a good and unique description tag for each page.

3. Apart from money-saving coupons, at least on the
index page, invite folks and describe why you are different than
others - fresh ingredients, the dough is made special, etc. etc.

Collectors-info · #4 10-08-2009, 07:13 PM

Would reduce the menu image to 20kb to help page loading. Its at 970kb at the mo.

indytnt · #5 10-11-2009, 06:45 PM

Very Nice. Do you deliver? If so, you may want to consider allowing customers to make online orders as a competitive edge. Ordering online at home or the office is becoming popular.

djbigphilly · #6 10-13-2009, 06:15 PM

the site is good
i think you shouldlet go of the pop up i hate them
and do online ordering
but the site is good

http://bigmixtape.com/

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