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Old 05-31-2006, 08:31 PM
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Smile Check out my new & improved site

This is my new site, dont know if you'll remember the last one I posted but it didn't display properly. I have changed it completly. Please let me know of any broken links etc.

Thanks in advance

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Old 05-31-2006, 08:46 PM
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Hi Ash!

I like the overall look of your design. It's very elegant yet contemporary. I like the way the site works and all the links I tried worked although I realise there are some unfinished areas.

The only thing I strugled with really was your title. The elegant script you have used is a little blurred and difficult to make out. This sometimes happens when it's saved as a gif or jpg. Apart from that tiny pick, I think it's lovely and you have done a great job.
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Old 05-31-2006, 08:58 PM
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Hi Ash,

yes, professional site, extremely easy to navigate, loads fast and is well layed out.
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Old 05-31-2006, 10:08 PM
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HI ash.whitehair
is it me or are peolpe getting better at this,
very professional looking site have you done this before.
must agree with Amanda i could not make out the small text on the header.

four stars for you go to the front of the class.
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Old 05-31-2006, 10:30 PM
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i must say and beleive me if i didnt like it i would say but i think thisi s absolutely brilliant i love the way it is designed good work and when you get fed up serving that lovely food webdesighn is for you , agree with mand tho but hey we can find soemthing in everything even laff laff my site ha ha maybe not
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Old 06-01-2006, 12:56 AM
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Well, I think it looks good - and hate to give any negative - but I didn't think your links worked - when the words across the top all run together - first I didn't think they were links. Then when I took my mouse over them and they didn't do anything to let me know they were links, I didn't try to click on them. You've taken away all the options that let the normal user know that something is a link - and I think by doing so - you'll not get as many people to interior pages.

I notice you kept the standard method for your "click to enlarge" - including the underline and the hand appearing. I really recommend you separate your links on the top of the pages - think about using | - and that you do something to make them look like links again.

The site looks great!!!
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Old 06-01-2006, 01:07 AM
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Everything worked well for me, It looks great
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Old 06-01-2006, 01:14 AM
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Hello everyone, thank you for all your comments, I really do appricate it - please please please keep them coming...any advise on how I can make the logo appear clearer? On my laptop its perfect, but I just viewed it on a 17" monitor and I completly agree that it blends in with the background. What if I saved it as different file?

Vodahost any comments on my site?
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Old 06-01-2006, 01:56 PM
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whitehair,

I think it is a very nice site. You have put a lot of work into it and it shows. I agree with Bethers about the menu links. Try putting a hyphen after each link title. That will help space it out a little and not let it run to gether. Don't put a hyphen after the last one though. Just a thought.

Other than that- it really looks great.
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Old 06-07-2006, 12:29 AM
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although I found my way home using your site map, I would like to see home links to your index. your menu made me hungry
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Old 06-08-2006, 05:41 AM
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Great website. I think it is really good; and could be great
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