Thread: First website>> Please critique

Please rip my site to shreds!
I need this site to be perfect.

(just for fun) if you don't mind being a potential customer for a moment what do you think of my services? Would you want an estimate from us?

Thank you for your time. http:http://www.seequality.com

your link is pointing to contact.html
and that submit button is not working

Your contact.php page works, but is missing the success page.....404 error.

The industrial link on your contact page was not working......

Thank you so very much.
Yes these things I'm attempting to work these out but my brain is slow.

What do you think of the actual look of my site?

I'll give you a review in ten minutes when your site finally downloads!!!!

Why is it so slow to down load?

well, put it this way... I've given up already sorry.

Thank for your time anyways.

I'm kidding ya.. I'm looking but it's slow going... give me ten

Ok,

First glance.

Too slow to load on all pages, you need to look at this.

Site needs centering in the middle of the screen

On the home page, under each section you have a lot of underlined
words. Underlined words to your average internet user screams out 'CLICK ON ME' However, these are not links, so remove the underlineing on all of these to save disappointment and confusion.

Site has too many images and not enough text. If I was considering using you I would want more details than pictures.

You don't have to show me your awards on every page.... I get the picture... remove the awards and replace with some good quality info that makes me say 'god i must call these guys now'!

Great.. I think I'll give you a call... oh no wait.... where are you... UK, USA, Japan, France, Mars ??????

You are one site out of 600 billion and growing...... maximise the chance of people finding you on Google by placing your address on the website, and what areas you cover. There's no point in me calling you now is there? so remove the chance of me seeing your website on the net and increase it for those in your street, town, state, country.

You've put a lot of hard work in I can see that, but just rethink on these issues and you will improve drastically.

Oh and don't forget to do your META data!

Best of luck

You have bee very helpful, and I will change everything you suggested.

Whats META data?

Oh, San Francisco Bay Area.
Thanks again for your time!!!

Page titles
keywords
page descriptions

go into page properties, you will find all the fields in there. But read up very carefully on how to optimise your website. Don't just put anything in there.

Looks like i might need your paid expertise sometime in the near future.
Thanks for all your help.

I thought your roll over images of the before and after were excellent

Hi, the front page is very slow at well over 2000kb & should be looking nearer the 200kb in total. Its mainly down to images.
If your using the image swap/mouse over, the 2 images want to be exactly the same size in W&H to save distortion.