
Originally Posted by
Bethers
Very quickly here - you have quite a bit to do :)
First - you don't put words into the meta keywords unless they ARE the KEYWORDS for THAT PAGE. And you have things like loan and classifieds and for sale - as individual words and phrases - which won't do you any good if they WERE on the page. Right now your meta keywords are spamming.
Your home page has almost no text with your keywords - so the se's (and your visitors) aren't going to see what you have.
Outside of that - as a visitor to the site, I'd probably leave right away because of the picture being so distorted - you need to fix that to give yourself a professional look right from the start.
The picture on the About Us page is much better - always remember - you need to keep proportions.
You also need to check all your spelling. On the about us page - you use the word there where you need their - I know that isn't a difference between US and UK - I'm not sure about where you used amature - is that the correct UK spelling?
When I go to see the horses for sale - you don't take me to their pictures - but to a form - where I have to click another link to see the horses. I think you need to reverse this. I went because I want to see what's offered - don't make it hard for me. If I see something I like, I'll be more likely willing to fill out the form.
I know you didn't ask for a site review - but SEO is hand-in-hand necessary with the design/look of the site.
I also noticed a grammatical error when glancing at the horses for sale page - you have your where you need you're. (We might make mistakes typing in here - but it's critical that you go over the website with a fine tooth comb for them there - people do notice). In that same paragraph you have a long run-on sentence.
I'm not sure how you loaded your pictures - I didn't look - but the page of horses - with tiny thumbnails - took forever to load on my high speed connection. You need to fix that. And I suggest you use larger pics (yes you'll still want them to be able to be enlarged) but these are so tiny that you can't even tell what they are.
You can find a very basic SEO book in my signature - it's free - I suggest you read it - and then make some changes - and come on back :)