Please Review

[Highspeed]

Okay, I've been working on this site for a few weeks now. Can someone review it and let me know of any adjustments you see that I need to make. I have designed this for a church in my area. Please realize I do not have all the know-how that many of you guys possess. There are many techniques that I have yet to learn. I built this with the basic tools. Let me know...

https://www.ordained4life.com

[Karen Mac]

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Highspeed

Looks to me that you have done pretty well with some basic tools. I didnt go thru the whole site, but on your sample ordination the church "internationl" bleeds out over the certificate. Maybe make this text a little smaller and move it to the left a little. Also in your header, the small blue "World Leader in legal ordination" is hard to read. Change that to a more open text in a small area like that as the scroll/script fonts tend to bleed together. Try tahoma, or arial, or one of those.

Karen

[Bethers]

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I think you've done a great job. The colors stand out. My first recommendation would be that you either center align the page or align it all the way to the right.

[ez-ez]

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I agree with the above. In addition, the first page to enter is way too long ans right at the bottom there is the VH affiliate banner.. is there a reason for it being so far down in the page..?

[Highspeed]

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Thanks for the reviews. I appreciate any and all help.

Ez-ez...what do you mean
1. the first page to enter is way too long
Are you talking about my homepage? It's only 850 x 900...or am I seeing thing wrong. I'm a newbie at this stuff.

2. right at the bottom there is the VH affiliate banner
Where should the banner be placed? At the side?

Thanks so much to all 3 of you.

Highspeed

[Bethers]

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I don't believe the page is too long and if you are going to place the banner on your home page, I believe it belongs at the bottom as you've done it - your site is not about selling website services (which is why I tell most people that affiliate banners don't belong on their home page at all) - but for a single one like this - it's fine where it is IMO

[A Gardiner]

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I noticed as above you should view you sample page.It seemed as though Certificate of Ordination may not be where you intended and Platinum Pack was slightly visible.
ABC Gardiner

[Highspeed]

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Thank you AG, I don't know how I missed those things, but I will correct them. Thanks for letting me know.

[choke]

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Great job for your first one, I to am a newbie and I think you've got it down better than me.
Can't wait to see the next one.

[bill2006]

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To be honest, what is it?
On-line diploma for ministeries? It seems incomplete, perhaps some background about what the entity is and exactly what it is you are selling, would help interested users.

[Muzicman]

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Hi bill2006, sorry I didn't respond quickly to you. I was out of pocket for a couple weeks. Basically, this church is offering to credential (ordain) qualified ministers...offering them legal papers to perform weddings, funerals, church services, etc... At least this is my understanding.

[naghosthunter]

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site looks great like the picture in the middle.