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[Dory]

Hi guys,

I've altered my site slightly please tell me if it's any better, and let me know if i have the keywords right, I have also changed the page names.

Many Thanks
Rachel

[Marincky]

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Very nicely laid out, simple, to the point, colourful and very appealing. Nice work.
Ramsey

[Bethers]

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I like the changes. As a new site you can get away with changing your names, but be careful of doing that as the se's spider and index you - as they will still have the old names in their database.

I also do not like that all your page names are almost the same. Each page needs to have it's own keywords - which then allows you to bring people in for different keywords and keyword phrases. If you use the same on every page, you'll be asking the se's to decide which page is really the one that deals with that and you'll be competing with yourself with them.

I'm sure there are other phrases and words that you could target to get traffic. And while the dash is great - you really don't want really long page names if you can avoid them. Just my two cents.

[Karen Mac]

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Dory,

I agree with Beth, and, If you are going to sell prints, just load give them the option of buying the print and buying the card. I wouldnt waste time contacting you, id want to buy it. I would suggest just adding them to your cart!

Karen

[Julie S.]

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I love your photos! =)

I like your site... but, in my opinion, you really should keep your page width at 800. To me it just looks too wide. Plus, if someone has an 800x600 monitor setting (as many people still do), they have to scroll from side to side... and that's a bit of a bother.

Otherwise... nice! =)

[bill2006]

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Well Done !!

[Hester]

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Your site looks very nice! I love the way you have the pictures/gallery laid out. The front page is nicely set up with the pictures/mouse-over pictures. :) I like that stuff!

I don't think I ever got to see your old site so I can't really compare. I love the photos!

[Dory]

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Thank you for your kind comments and useful suggestions, It's a work in progress and i imagine it will take a while to get it right if it can ever be right.

Many Thanks Rachel

[ez-ez]

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I agree with all the above... and from an average person's point of view, I love your site Dory.. it really has a unique feel and it's neatly done.. I don't go all techno when I view sites.. I just play the ordinary Jo Blow who has no idea.. and from that position, I think you are a top web designer.

All the best.

[asirimarco]

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very nice and easy to use site. do you make the paper and designs on the cards too? ann

[naghosthunter]

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much better your getting the hang of things :)