My website is finished

[scubadiver]

Aloha, I have finished my website. I would appreciate any feedback from you and of course any suggestions you may have. David helped me get it up and I learned a lot on connecting every thing to paypal. Beth is testing the system and I am waiting for my first sale. I am so excited that this, it has been a long time coming, since August this year. Thanks so much for your feedback!

[bill2006]

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Nice,
The 1st button of the NavBar on this page doesn't show (only a red x) the link does work.
Consider alt text to you NavBar.
On some of your pictures you have used that (annoying) "pirate" code but not on all pages/images. A watermark is much more elegant and accomplishes the same.

Good luck

[SChajin]

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There is something weird going on with your contact page. Looks good though.

[mark89]

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Hi Scubadiver
Your website looking very nice well done. The only thing is your contact page thar need to be fix.

Marcos

[Karen Mac]

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CiCi
Looks like you have somehow added a frame to your gif thats blank, and making that grey flash on your contact page and your navigation totally is absent from your buy now page. Might want to fix those as well.

Karen

[Vasili]

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I am happy to see such a refinement in your overall web design....from your original layouts and schemes to this simplified and crisp presentation, your work has paid off grandly!

There is still somewhat of a mis-registration from page-to-page (most likely from your width Properties being different: from clicking/placements outside original page widths?), but that is easily corrected.

Congratulations, CiCi! You should be quite proud.

[choco777]

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Nice looking, you have come a long ways.

[scubadiver]

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I think all bugs have been worked out. I appreciate all your feedback.

[LadyEye]

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Your site is beautiful, just as it should look ....

From this page http://www.hawaiionyourown.com/travel-tips.html

your buy it now link is not working ..... check that

Just one other suggestion, on that very same page ....

can you make your links to the tips, fuschia in color, to match instead of the blue .....

I love your header .... goes awesome with "Hawaii on your own" .... looks secluded and gives the look and feel for "On Your Own"

Bravo to you!!

[bill2006]

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Good job!

One tiny thing, its not significant, in the contact page, there's a punctuation mark "period" in the comment box.

[scubadiver]

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Ah, got it!

[Bethers]

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CiCi - isn't it exciting to have your baby ready for the world???

[davidundalicia]

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Scubadiver and Bill:

The punctuation mark catches whether the client has filled out that field or not.
The same form is also used for the survey page and both send the data to the same database.
So now the database can tell the difference between the 2 forms.........

[scubadiver]

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Thank you so much! This is all so exciting to have my own business in such a large playing field as the Internet. As far as my research shows, I am the only one doing this for Hawaii. There is one person with similar info giving it for free but in a different format. My ebook serves a different purpose I think. We'll see if the public thinks so, too.

[circuspet.com]

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Scubadiver:

Ya gotta know bra der is no finich in web building. Looking good.