sorted out the problems ...i think

[matty smith]

hi,
it's taken another week of tutorial bashing, but I have finally got the thank-you page to appear - have changed the font and have even been found by google now I've republished - please let me know if it's clear and simple, or slow and cumbersome so I can fine tune.
Thanks to all.
www.amandacleaningservices.co.uk

[PlayItByBeer]

Re: sorted out the problems ...i think

matty,

You've got some interesting keywords, what has paris hilton got to do with cleaning services??? LOL

have a look at http://www.widexl.com/remote/search-...-analyzer.html as you've got some problems there.

Cheers,

[micheleros]

Re: sorted out the problems ...i think

Amanda,

I cracked up when I saw the 'paris hilton' in your keywords! LOL...ditto to above.

Anyway on to the good stuff. Is it my imagination or is there a chunk missing from your template on the LHS.

You need to spread out your contact details a bit more, it looks too scrunched together, at least in Internet Explorer.

Your email address is very hard to see as it is similar colour to the background.

Your title bar just says 'index' so you need to change the title tag. Take a look at the title bars of the websites I posted below for some ideas.

Need to include alt. tags over your images.

Services:

We provide a service you can trust, with a flexible, "no worry", guaranteed (guarantee) and fully insured service. If you aren't receiving excellent service already or are having trouble getting your own cleaner the (n) call us for no-strings advice or a free quote.

I would maybe rework this whole paragraph.

Take a look at the following to get some ideas on wording:

http://www.marigoldcleaning.co.uk/

http://www.fkdomestics.co.uk/

http://www.libertyhomeservices.co.uk/

Your ecover link doesn't work and neither does the email address.

Hope all this helps

Michele

[matty smith]

Re: sorted out the problems ...i think

Thas for your help - meta-tags done after several glasses of red and someone suggested that it was a commonly searched word which would help with hits !! ...and I've already got scrubber in there.
The template was sourced from the bluevoda ones (S21 4644)- - on my file pages I have a blue logo background behind this area which hides it but it seems to disappear when published. The colour of the e-mail contact changed once it was http'd as a link and I havn't worked out how to change the txt colour as ptoperties only allows me to change the background not the text.
I am amending the grammar and spelling - you read it 50 times and still can't see it - hence the success of this testing ground!
i have logged on to your link playitBeer but not sure what I am looking for, however will lose the PH metaT anyway - was lowering the tone a bit
Matty