second site up

[FRANKJONE]

Can I get some feedback on my new site
www.bestplasticcleaner.com

[nzbr]

Re: second site up

Hi Frank,

I think you should optimize your site for the se's.

1) I've read somewhere that's not good to have 'best' as part of the page title

2) People look for content and not only pictures, therefore one idea should be a brief description of your products on your main page. This way you would target some of the key words people might be using (in google or yahoo) to find and buy products like yours.

Cheers,

[Bethers]

Re: second site up

I don't see best in the page title - just in the domain name. Not sure what's wrong with that?

Frank, I think you've done a great job building this - you probably could put a little more targeted text on the home page, but the first correction would be to change:
"Restores and Polish Platic Surfaces"
to either
"Restore and Polish Plastic Surfaces"
or
"Restores and Polishes Plastic Surfaces"

Grammatical error :)

If you're main keyword is Novus, you are pretty well optimized for that. If you want to optimize for plastic cleaner - I'd get that on the page elsewhere - and might suggest you make an h2 out of the header about uses - and maybe change that to:
"Novus Uses for Plastic Polishing and Cleaning"

Think of all you've learned since you started your internet businesses - and now moving them to VH - it's certainly been quite an education, hasn't it?

(And I'm looking forward to the rest of the pages getting the navigation you've changed to on the home page - looking good!)

[FRANKJONE]

Re: second site up

Thanks Beth made changes that you suggested.
made first sale today on new site

[Bethers]

Re: second site up

Wooooooohoooooooooooooooooooo Frank - I'm doing the happy dance with you!!!