4 Keep Sake website on review

[leoni_v]

This is a website for a local s****booking shop. I volunteered since I'm making stencils and stuff for them anyway ;)

http://4keepsake.leo-design.net/

Site was written using nothing but Notepad and CSS - well I tried, I'm sure behind-the-scenes it's probably just as hacked-together as I think it is!

What I need is some eagle-eyes to look for silly typos (on the English side) and broken links. My client has already approved the look-and-feel bit with colours etc so not much I can change there.

The Gallery is one of those supplied by Vodahost through Fantastico .. it's nice, got cool features, but why oh why is it so slow to load? Any suggestions?

Any feedback greatly appreciated!

Edit: Hahaha, check out the censorship on the web. Sjeesh, the passtime of mothers glueing little flowers and swirls to photos of their kiddies is now known as s****ping, LOL!

[cathrn]

Re: 4 Keep Sake website on review

Hi,
I'm new at this so can't help much with the technical side, hope someone can though.
Noticed two things I would change, but saw only one typo. Well done.

Stencils are cut with laser from polistyrene sheets.
Stencils are laser cut from polystyrene sheets.

,available here only!
,only available here!

[leoni_v]

Re: 4 Keep Sake website on review

Ah, thanks for spotting those! It's funny, my English is fairly fluent but the moment I have to translate an Afrikaans sentence to English, all that goes away and I get stuck in awkward sentence structures ;)

Anyway, they're fixed now :)

[leoscats]

Re: 4 Keep Sake website on review

Nice site

[Tom vR]

Re: 4 Keep Sake website on review

You have done a good job. Well done. Have you checked your site here?
Click the links in the Details column. See the broken link.

[PlayItByBeer]

Re: 4 Keep Sake website on review

Lyk Goed Leoni,

You're braver than I, as a VH account holder why haven't you made use of the easy to use and feature full -BlueVoda?

Cheers,

[leoni_v]

Re: 4 Keep Sake website on review

Thanks everyone for the feedback!

@Tom vR: Wow, that's a cool site, it's bookmarked now! Very useful!

@PlayItByBeer: I'd better download the new version and have a look! But last time I looked, sometime in 2006, I didn't like it very much. I've always liked wrestling with the code, myself ;)

[cathrn]

Re: 4 Keep Sake website on review

You write your own code and translate between languages. Congratulations, two major achievements. Good luck with your site!