Newbie here, please check my first website

[devoninaz]

This is my first site,I know the url is way too long,Can that be chaanged in BV,or do I have to live with it, lol?Still some relining of pages,working on meta tags, so... some opinions and any suggestions would be appreciated.
Devon

http://www.shadesofarizonapuremineralmakeup.com

[rangaz007]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Looks very good. Nice clean site, easy to navigate, and easy on the eyes. Well done!
Yeah the url is a bit on the long side :O

[jkadin]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

You have alot of overlapping in internet explorer a lot of pages your dazziling eyes page took time to load I would check on your images they may need to come down in kbs heres alink for the pix resizer
http://www.vodahost.com/pix.htm for the first shot I think your off to a good start also you have pages that are untitled use keyword or keyword phases look at similar sites so you could get a good idea just make sure those keywords are used in tex on that page like I said your off to a good start the site has a good look just fix thoses tweaks and have the keywords in place in titles and on pages in tex you will be amazed I personaly think your on your way problay more thanyou can imagone good luck

[devoninaz]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Thank you for your input.I have wprked on renaming pages,duhh, and getting it inline. Will do pics again, I did resize them 1 time,gyess they need to be a little smaller. Thanks for your time.

[patsy121105]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Wow! That's some name you got there!
Nice bright site, not too harsh on the eye.
You need to check your composition - space after commas, no comma after 'and', full stops and new sentence where you have commas. etc.
Easy to navigate. Like it.
Patsy

[nzbr]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Hi Devon,
Nice site.
On your 'ingredients' page you left at the end of the page one extra 'ShadesOfArizona@2008" .

Cheers,

[StoneFaith]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Hey how do you make websites i've been trying to make one but dont have the money to do it so like im really stuck.?

[HalaalPages]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Well, you will need a web builder like BlueVoda, which is what most people on here use. I'm a web designer and it's the only one I've ever used. Haven't really tried to look around lol!

Anyway, with BlueVoda, you can only publish the pages you design to a VodaHost account. Go here to download BlueVoda for free and play around with it. If you can use MS word or a program like that, you can use BlueVoda.

[Lcoisas]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Hi there...


I like the look of of it, but if you allow me, I would change the font type to another one more easily legible.

Read somewhere that font type must not get your eyes tired after you read for a while, and you DO want people to read what you have on your site, dont you?

Besides that, good job!

Susana

[devoninaz]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Thank You All !! Getting all the little things corrected ,thanks for pointing them out to me. You are all great. Thanks Again, Devon

[Sunchaser]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Hi :)

Very nice!

The makeup comes in very bright, way out colours !- should appeal to teenagers. If you start selling a lot to teens - I would maybe change the pics on your homepage to show what effects the makeup can achieve.

The photos and 'add to cart' buttons on your concealers page need lining up slightly.

Mineral makeup is very popular right now so goodluck with your site!

[devoninaz]

Re: Newbie here, please check my first website

Thanks You Sunchaser,
I thought about going for the teen thing, but,most of the teens dont have any money lol. I am working on a page for teens,the whole Scene look, but most of these kids rely on parents for the money. I am raising a teen grandaughter,she knows how to spend my money!
Thanks Again,............Devon