Testing my first real Presentation Page with Video and Form

[Icare360]

Hello,
I just finished building a new presentation page with video and form, a bit of a challenge but it's my first real one.
I still need to tweak it a little, my form is not working the way I want!
I tried setting all the fields but still some problems to set them all to respond properly. For now I just want to know how it looks in general, your comments are welcomed!
This only my test site I will use it on another main domain when I get it right!

http://www.theincomeplan.info

Thanks

Joel

[ahimsa]

Re: Testing my first real Presentation Page with Video and Form

Your free tour is not free!! I must give you a lot of information before you will let me enter!! I suspect you will get a lot of fake info on these forms as more & more people are reluctant to enter a new site this way............
good luck,
david

[mrmagoo144]

Re: Testing my first real Presentation Page with Video and Form

your video is 7 minutes long, can you sort of shorten to maybe 1 to 2 minutes and give more of a video for people that enter your site? i'm not sure how many people will stay for the full 7 minutes. here is a one that was more than 10 minutes long and i just edited it to make it short and sweet

http://videopostcards.info/tprpressaprint.html

[Icare360]

Re: Testing my first real Presentation Page with Video and Form

Your free tour is not free!! I must give you a lot of information before you will let me enter!! I suspect you will get a lot of fake info on these forms as more & more people are reluctant to enter a new site this way............
good luck,
david


Thanks David for the feedback, I think you have a good point for the form, I think I will remove it and let the visitors be free to explore what's behind the scene!.......It is a Free Tour, no obligations at all, so maybe I could offer something else...like a "free gift" to thank the new visitors instead!
Good that's what I wanted!..."some feedback"!

Regards,

Joel

[Icare360]

Re: Testing my first real Presentation Page with Video and Form

your video is 7 minutes long, can you sort of shorten to maybe 1 to 2 minutes and give more of a video for people that enter your site? i'm not sure how many people will stay for the full 7 minutes. here is a one that was more than 10 minutes long and i just edited it to make it short and sweet
http://videopostcards.info/tprpressaprint.html

Thank you "mrmagoo144" another good point, myself I found the video a bit too long but I took what was available, I will work on a shorter version.

Regards,

Joel