website review ?

[blair]

hi all
just wondering if i could have some feedback on my site
i now have it finished hmmm well i hope !! depends on your coments ?
many thanks blair
www.the-sweetie-cart.co.uk

[germansin]

Re: website review ?

Hello

I visited your site and I liked it a lot.


German

[blair]

Re: website review ?

hi there
thanks for viewing my site i have been tweeking it for a week or so
is there any things i should consider ?
will the wording around my home page be counted as keywords? as they are semi hidden etc
again thanks for your coment
blair

[thefirst]

Re: website review ?

:@) very good website. www.darrenwilsonmusic.co.uk

[Hester]

Re: website review ?

looks cute! I'm craving some sweets now. :)

You may actually want to check the "Home" page for an extra line of text that is randomly hovering on the bottom left - "sweetie cart, candy cart, candy buffet, sweetie buffet" (Assuming you're using BlueVoda...) I believe maybe it was inadvertently placed there or just forgotten about. It seems out of place to me.

I've done this before and it's easy to miss it, especially if you changed your page size in the page properties and didn't delete something on the page that was within those page borders before, but are now outside of them. You won't be able to scroll down to find/delete it unless you change the page height to a size that will allow you to scroll down to it and see it. :)

Great work!!