Advise and suggestions?

[designmobisite]

Hello All,

Currently designing my website in combination of bv and wordpess. Please can you make some comment about first page of my site. http://www.designmobisite.com/

Best regards,

Anam

[pink_eeyore]

Re: Advise and suggestions?

Looks very clean and professional. I may suggest perhaps saying: "first month free!" and put the price in a bullet below it such as "14.99 per month" instead of "free for a month and £14.99 after".