Hi,
I would appreciate feedback on my two websites:
http://www.westerncapeholiday.com
http://www.westerncapeproperty.co.za
Thanks,
Fred van Leeuwen
Hi,
I would appreciate feedback on my two websites:
http://www.westerncapeholiday.com
http://www.westerncapeproperty.co.za
Thanks,
Fred van Leeuwen
Fred,
-Not sure if this may have been overlooked form other reviews. Seems you are using an uncommon font 'kartika' unless all users have it, they will see a default font. On my pc your text appears with shades, parts of the letters are darker than others. This can be distracting.
-Other pages you use 'franklin gothic' - appears as Times Roman.
-Grammar: We hire out equipment which is clean and in good condition We hire out clean equipment in good condition, etc.
-Nice job on the changing pics on header.
Second page:
-Consider a name/describer for your photos. Location, hotel, etc.
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