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  1. #1
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    Jun 2007
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    Default Please review my websites

    Hi,

    I would appreciate feedback on my two websites:

    http://www.westerncapeholiday.com
    http://www.westerncapeproperty.co.za

    Thanks,

    Fred van Leeuwen

  2. #2
    Join Date
    May 2006
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    Default Re: Please review my websites

    Fred,
    -Not sure if this may have been overlooked form other reviews. Seems you are using an uncommon font 'kartika' unless all users have it, they will see a default font. On my pc your text appears with shades, parts of the letters are darker than others. This can be distracting.
    -Other pages you use 'franklin gothic' - appears as Times Roman.
    -Grammar: We hire out equipment which is clean and in good condition We hire out clean equipment in good condition, etc.
    -Nice job on the changing pics on header.

    Second page:
    -Consider a name/describer for your photos. Location, hotel, etc.

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