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    My 1st attempt comments please.
    Had great fun designing it Blue Voda is fantastic.
    James.

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    Last edited by LadyEye; 01-12-2009 at 11:40 AM. Reason: added url for website review

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    Quote Originally Posted by james gibson View Post
    My 1st attempt comments please.
    Had great fun designing it Blue Voda is fantastic.
    James.

    http://www.villacasadogovernador.com
    Thanks a lot, shows what a D/head I am.
    Thanks again,
    James.

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    Ah, yw, but hey, we all forget a little something now and then, so no worries .. just thought I'd slip that in there for you ..

    Had a quick look and notice you need to give your pages you created some page titles and page descriptions ...

    You do this on page properties ... give it a page title on the general tab and then choose metatag tab and write up some keywords, those found on your webpages and give each page a nice description in that area as well .. these are the areas that search engines often use when they list your site .. each page should be unique and the text content on each of your pages should reflect what you write in these areas ... think of what someone might put into a search box to come up with a website like yours - and if your page content doesn't reflect how and what searchers might be looking for, add some quality content on your pages that does ... ya .. go get em .. lol

    just as a note, so that I am not confusing you or others - naming, saving and publishing your pages is different than given them a page title ..

    Looks like a real nice area ... ahhhhhhhh ... canadian snow .. gotta love that too .

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    Quote Originally Posted by LadyEye View Post
    Ah, yw, but hey, we all forget a little something now and then, so no worries .. just thought I'd slip that in there for you ..

    Had a quick look and notice you need to give your pages you created some page titles and page descriptions ...

    You do this on page properties ... give it a page title on the general tab and then choose metatag tab and write up some keywords, those found on your webpages and give each page a nice description in that area as well .. these are the areas that search engines often use when they list your site .. each page should be unique and the text content on each of your pages should reflect what you write in these areas ... think of what someone might put into a search box to come up with a website like yours - and if your page content doesn't reflect how and what searchers might be looking for, add some quality content on your pages that does ... ya .. go get em .. lol

    just as a note, so that I am not confusing you or others - naming, saving and publishing your pages is different than given them a page title ..

    Looks like a real nice area ... ahhhhhhhh ... canadian snow .. gotta love that too .
    Thanks a lot Lady Eye will get on with that now.
    Regards,
    James.

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    Hi James, also check your nav buttons. When you click on them they go to the Voda button..
    Sharon Chajin

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    Quote Originally Posted by SChajin View Post
    Hi James, also check your nav buttons. When you click on them they go to the Voda button..
    Thanks a lot, got it sorted, you guys are good.
    Regards,
    James.

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    OK call me dumb...........................
    Where is this place? It's beautiful, and Holly I didn't see any snow!!!!!!!
    I think you are lacking some important information. You might want to give some info on the location, transportation, items of interest. IMHO
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    You also need full navagation on all your pages, no one likes to have to go back to your home page every time the want a new page. Keep it all the same, same type, location, order and so on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SAman View Post
    OK call me dumb...........................
    Where is this place? It's beautiful, and Holly I didn't see any snow!!!!!!!
    I think you are lacking some important information. You might want to give some info on the location, transportation, items of interest. IMHO
    Good point will sort that out
    Its in the Algarve Portugal, a fantastic place.
    Regards,
    James.

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    Quote Originally Posted by D'son View Post
    You also need full navagation on all your pages, no one likes to have to go back to your home page every time the want a new page. Keep it all the same, same type, location, order and so on.
    Once again good thinking, obviously I don't, but main thing learning all the time, thanks mainly to you guys.
    Regards,
    James.

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    Looks good. I agree with the navigation being the same on every page.

    Also- I would switch the nav buttons on the home page. Have History first and then Villa. Additionally- on the History page- have a picture or two to keep the readers interest in reading further.

    Looking good. Nice place.

    Andy
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    Quote Originally Posted by Andy128 View Post
    Looks good. I agree with the navigation being the same on every page.

    Also- I would switch the nav buttons on the home page. Have History first and then Villa. Additionally- on the History page- have a picture or two to keep the readers interest in reading further.

    Looking good. Nice place.

    Andy
    Cheers Andy it is done.
    Regards, James

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    Default 1st Attempt Updated

    Think its better, thanks to input from you guys.
    Comments would be appreciated.
    Regards,
    James.

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    Only use 1 post for your sites appraisal, as it will get very confusing with comments already made.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Collectors-info View Post
    Only use 1 post for your sites appraisal, as it will get very confusing with comments already made.
    OK
    Regards,
    James

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    Looks good. Center your information and availability page and your good.

    Andy
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    James it looks much better!!! I looked at it with FF, you have some alignment problems. On the home page the title is not centered, on your info page the little cartoon pics are overlapping some text, you might want to down load FireFox and check it with that browser too. ( It's a free browser)
    Mike

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