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    Smile please review site (but be nice!)

    Hi

    Could you review my site -most appreciated

    http://www.seminarboost.co.uk
    Karen Goddard
    http://seminarboost.co.uk
    The best way to know what events are happening in the persoanl development world

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    Default Re: please review site (but be nice!)

    I can see you have put a lot of effort into this site Karen but I'll be honest with you as you still have a load of work to do.

    1) Your site needs some structure/layout, a Header, Navigation and Footer and these 3 elements need to be consistant throughout your pages, so decide on a template.
    2) Your Home page is just a jumble and you it doesn't look tidy. The page doesn't look balanced.
    3) I'm using Firefox and you have some white text under your left hand menu (at the top)
    4) Centering your pages is always a good idea. You do this in page properties.
    5) You have all your menu links to open in 'popup' windows. This really aint a good idea. Have them open within the site once you've established your structure and layout.
    6) You havent validated any of your form elements on your events page. I just sent you a blank email. If I can do it. so can the spammers.

    On a positive note you've done the hard bit, ie added content to all the pages. All you have to do is now make it visually appealing to your visitors and with any luck some of them will part with their cash and advertise with you.
    Happy Building

    DarrenC

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    Default Re: please review site (but be nice!)

    Ditto with Darren's comments.
    You will also need to do quite a bit of work on the title/keyword/description areas to marry up with the contents within the page.

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    Default Re: please review site (but be nice!)

    Hi

    Just wanted to say thanks - I have taken note of lots of your comments & feel alot happier with my site

    Thanks

    Karen Goddard
    http://seminarboost.co.uk
    The best way to know what events are happening in the persoanl development world

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    Arrow Re: please review site (but be nice!)

    Ditto with all comments

    I just looked at your index page where you have the title as
    Who is speaking & what can I learn

    You could make the title more descriptive to your page content.
    Looking at your page, I think you could have the title of the index page as

    Seminar Boost - Seminars. Workshops, Bootcamps, Courses

    The spy bots will "know" what your page is about.

    Similarly, with all other pages.

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    Default Re: please review site (but be nice!)

    Quote Originally Posted by life.starts@ymail.com View Post
    Hi

    Could you review my site -most appreciated

    http://www.seminarboost.co.uk
    Hiya,
    I don't want to be hush...
    But your site does not look like a site. It looks just messy home work. You really need lots of hard work and time.

    Good Luck anyway.

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    Default Re: please review site (but be nice!)

    Yep - still learning & tweeking ...& yes sometimes it feels like homework!

    Cheers for the comments
    Karen Goddard
    http://seminarboost.co.uk
    The best way to know what events are happening in the persoanl development world

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    Default Re: please review site (but be nice!)

    I'll tell you a little secret how to keep your website tidy. ( I use PhotoShop for this, but you can use those images which BV offers )
    So start by making logo.
    Put an image navigation under it, if you want to.
    Then make a navigation menu in left side, but this time - text menu ( for SEO ).
    And then create a footer ( at the very end of the page )

    And these few things will help you keep your work tidy.

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