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  1. #1
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    Default please visit and tell me my faults

    please visit my website and tell me my faults for me to correct em.
    www.mmerac.org

  2. #2
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    Default Re: please visit and tell me my faults

    Hi there,

    In my opinion there's too much going on! Your text is all over the place and write text on blue backgroung is not a good combination (and hard on the eyes).

    Good luck!

  3. #3
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    Default Re: please visit and tell me my faults

    red on blue is known to be hard on the eye and this is certainly the case here. Capital letters (particularly in a 'script' font are a def no no. Keep working at it. Simplify for a stronger outcome. Good luck. regards

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