please review my web pages

[D'son]

Re: please review my web pages

Andy, much improved I like the look much better. The fact that you shortened the home page was a wise choice. Ok, a few tweaks on the button for "about Us" when you mouse over it the lable disapears. Second center the pages, make sure the page properties are set between 800 to 900. The video did not work, and the images are still abit distorted. I hope this is constructive and will help.
Ed
marseilles youth sports

[andyrands]

Re: please review my web pages

thenks and yes all help is good iv sorted some things out and i dont know why the video does not work? iv re alined the pages and got the link to about us fixed well that is to say it all works when i go online to see the pages. and glad you think it looks better thanks again just need to sort out the video problem its on there with windows media as i can't figger out how else to do it lol................

[jkadin]

Re: please review my web pages

A couple of tweaks that I noticed where you have free quot no job to small quote the e was left off quote. On your price page on the bottom theres tex overlapping. Your pages open a new window keep it uniformed by staying in the same window. You came a long way since I first viewed it Iwas gong to give a review at that time but lost conection. good luck

[D'son]

Re: please review my web pages

Andy a few items left to fix, other than the video (check your control pannel to make sure it is there and how it is saved) your logos are very small and distorted, if you want them that small I would either make new ones or delete them entirely (they really don't add anything to your content now because you can not read them. The images are still very distorted (from shrinking them down) above the Ironman image the text runs off the page. There are two images of cameras (half way down the page) that seem out of place (like there not supposed to be there), one of them is half covered over, as well as both being distorted. As the post above mentioned I would have the pages open in the same window, be sure to have a way for them to link back. The banner above the video screen has a scroll that only works if one clicks on it (most never will) have it continuously scroll. I would link you email address to your email so that all they have to do is click on it right from your site (this I would have open in a different window) On your pricing page I would do a spelling and grammer check where you are expalining your services, and I would also have the prices in US dollars as well (just my oppinion since I live in the US) Hope this helps

Ed
Marseilles Youth Sports

[andyrands]

Re: please review my web pages

thank you everyone for the constuctive comments i will take notice and check your suggestions thanks again ALL

[D'son]

Re: please review my web pages

Andy
Nice Job, looks like you did take all our advice and the site looks great. If you figure out the problem with the video you'll have it, I did notice that the banner over the video seems to cover the screen abit. Not sure if this was intentional but I thouhgt I would bring it to your attention.

Ed
Marseilles Youth Sports

[lemmondr]

Re: please review my web pages

Andy,

Your About Us page looks a little rough. Try this below:

Hello! And welcome to A.R. Video Editing. Established in 2006 in a bedroom, we have come a long way. Now a small but efficient team will cater to YOU with a cheaper solution to Video Editing. We have edited a vast amount of footage which has been broadcasted on various sites like You tube, Linux and several other sites. We’ve had lots of success editing videos of Birthday Parties, Holiday gatherings, Weddings and various Special Occasions etc.

We can also transfer photos to DVD with a choice of your favorite audio tracks. We have a vast library of over 500 hours of music ranging from Classical to Rock.

Thank you for taking the time to read about and we hope when you think of editing your precious memories you will think of A.R. Video Editing.

Best of Luck!

Daniel-

[andyrands]

Re: please review my web pages

thanx and good wording ile use it thanks again any sugestions on how to make that video to play would be much appreiceated

[andyrands]

Re: please review my web pages

i have made changes to the about us page and thanks again

[andyrands]

Re: please review my web pages

how do i do this? (check your control pannel to make sure it is there and how it is saved)

[lemmondr]

Re: please review my web pages

Andy,

"About Us" page looks much better...you should title it ABOUT US. Take a look through the website...video's should be videos your 's is being used incorrectly..also on your banner..I'm sorry.. but it looks terrible...:( ect is wrong..should be etc...rite should be right...were should be where. You need to work on grammer and spelling..this will be a turn off to potential customers...if your spelling and grammer is wrong, they will not trust you with their photos or vidieos.

Best of Luck!!

Daniel-

[andyrands]

Re: please review my web pages

can you tell me how to upload a video file to my media player on the main page ?? do i need to publish it with public_html? or is there anouther way i am ment to do it?

[D'son]

Re: please review my web pages

Click on the control pannel, find the server that you are using and log in. Now click the file manager, click ok on the next screen,this will show all the fies you have uploaded. If you do not see your video file click the upload link at the upper portion of the page, find your file and click on it and up load. Now you should able to link to it (pay attention to how you lable it).

[andyrands]

Re: please review my web pages

thanks for that do i need to put the file in the media player at the setup when i first put a media player in my page?

[andyrands]

Re: please review my web pages

in my cpanel file manager i can see 2 video files 1 is 4mb and the other is 9mb so how do i get them to my media player what should the URL be the files are named:

(media_file.wmv)
and
(media_file1.wmv)

so do i type one of thoes as the url???