well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

[jasond]

hey all, i at least have my site up to get some comments and constructive input. not all links work properly, but the main purpose is to get opions & such.

please reply.

http://www.appelcreek.com

[Girlonthehill]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

Hi Jason,
What sort of image are you hoping to portray? Professional? Good value? Friendly? If I know what you're after I can be a little more constructive...

Technically you're off to a flying start. The links I tried were good,it loads quickly enough. Personally though, I'm not that enamoured with red and white - always reminds me of hospitals! But you've made a good start - keep up the good work.

[KJay_23]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

Hi Jason,

I agree with Amanda on the red and white lol, and the home page was a bit busy for me... too much moving text.

Also, make sure you name your pages in page properties. The home page loaded as "Untitled".

Otherwise, you're off to a good start. :)

[jasond]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

hey thanks for the reply. going for more of a "Great Deal" kinda thing than anything else.

the red & white just seemed to look a little better than other colors.

dang, i forgot about the proerties!

thanks again for the input. after i get comfortable with Voda, i'll see what i can do with Soho!

[wiggytuftuk]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

Hi Jason,
Got a good start going on,suggest a section saying who you are and what you are about before trying to sell your stuff.Site loads fine and the links you have work ok.
regards
Jay

[gueorgui]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

Hi Jason,

it seems that you,ve identified your niche....which is great start, personally I wouldn't use too much scrolling text.

Best wishes

[jasond]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

alrighty folks, made some revisions. changed the colors, added an "about" page, took out some of the scrolling & fixed the homepage name. although i did forget to do the other pages,,,,,,,,,,,geeeez!

see how it looks.

thanks again all.

http://www.appelcreek.com

[Girlonthehill]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

alrighty folks, made some revisions. changed the colors, added an "about" page, took out some of the scrolling & fixed the homepage name. although i did forget to do the other pages,,,,,,,,,,,geeeez!

see how it looks.

thanks again all.

http://www.appelltrycreek.com

Hi again
Dunno if it's a general web problem but I am just getting a blank untitled page. I'll try again later :o)

[jasond]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

Hi again
Dunno if it's a general web problem but I am just getting a blank untitled page. I'll try again later :o)

i may have been in there playing around or something. i just tried from my laptop & it loaded ok.

http://www.appelcreek.com

[KJay_23]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

The colors are MUCH better.

The only other thing I would suggest is continuity between your pages. Compared to your home page, which is looking very nice, the other pages are quite bland. Perhaps it would be best to use the same look for the rest of your site?

Just a suggestion! :)

[jasond]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

The colors are MUCH better.

The only other thing I would suggest is continuity between your pages. Compared to your home page, which is looking very nice, the other pages are quite bland. Perhaps it would be best to use the same look for the rest of your site?

Just a suggestion! :)

thank you & good point on the continuity. i have not submitted the site to the search engines or advertised it yet because i now it's not ready. i wanted to get some input to make it right.

thanks again, i will continue to update & ask for input.

jason

[KJay_23]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

You're welcome. Happy to help. :)

[Girlonthehill]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

Hi Jason,
The changes you have made have made a huge difference. It's looks great now. The blue is so much better than the red. There's continuity with each page which looks more professional. Links are good, loads quickly. Well done you. Good luck with your business.

[wiggytuftuk]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

Looking much better now Jason,you work fast i`ll give you that,well done mate.
regards
Jay

[jasond]

Re: well, i'm in cyberspace,,,,sorta. look & suggest please

Thanks all,
I've made some changes. nothing big but whatchya think?