my improved site

[axonline]

I have taken the advice of your earlier replies, so what ya'll think now.

www.offloadworld.com

[limebrook1]

Re: my improved site

Probably just me, but I wasn't quite sure what your site was about? You have to register, but do you need to pay? If so, what is the cost? I would have thought this should be made explicit.

And what do you get if you pay?

Just thought it could be clearer.

Regards

[Girlonthehill]

Re: my improved site

Probably just me, but I wasn't quite sure what your site was about? You have to register, but do you need to pay? If so, what is the cost? I would have thought this should be made explicit.

And what do you get if you pay?

Just thought it could be clearer.

Regards

Mmmm. Yes, I have got to agree with Trish. I have no real idea what your site is, what is about or what's going on. Is it a fun site? Is it a membership only site? If so what for? Why should I join - what benefits are there to joining? I think it's heading in the right direction insofar as the looks are concerned but think you have to put some more thought and direction into it. If it doesn't make sense and catch peoples' attention within the first three seconds - you've lost. There is nothing to grab that attention or show me why I should hang around.... Good luck and I look forward to seeing in again when you've made some more progress.

[SChajin]

Re: my improved site

I agree also, with them I'm not sure what it is all about.

[Bethers]

Re: my improved site

Agree with the above - not only do I not know why I am there or what I will gain by being there, but I definitely wouldn't consider advertising - what possible gain would there be??

You really need to let people know what it's about.

[ddstiles]

Re: my improved site

It is - to be be blunt - the kind of site one immediately dumps and hopes that nothing wrong has occurred to foul your computer. It needs a reasonable entry point - a reason to continue looking. It is also very wide and requires scrolling to read any text message you have. Sorry, but that's what I saw.

DDS