Thoughts suggestions

[Liwendyll]

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Okay one last critique for the nite would be greatly appreciated. What ya think now?

http://www.virtuallaborforce.net.index.html

[Vasili]

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Velly cool!

(Just tweak the top left box lines -above menu- to align...)
> Ever think about using verdana as a font? Personally, I think it would be a better "match" to your site, and be more legible than the TimesRoman...

Soright? Soright! Nite.

Will pop in on you whenever....

[MickiRenee]

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Well, it looks great to me! I was impressed with your color and style at the top. I read somewhere that italics can be hard to read when there is a lot of it, but it looked nice on your page. Good luck with your site!

[Liwendyll]

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Yes the Verdana is awesome I like that very much thanks for the suggestion updating pages Ill be posting again in a day or two for another critique. Thanks so much for the help.

[islandcrazy]

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Well, RATS, I can't see your last edit, but the first two are WONDERFUL! I love that header and I love the robot. I love the colors you chose and the menu buttons. Clean, crisp, "techno". YOur business concept is very interesting, too.

I think your layout matches your "theme" and content and the nature of your business PERFECTLY (well, as close to as you can I suppose!) I like the size of the large header (the first ones as I don't know if you resized it later). It balances out the huge amount of text. I'm a lazy reader I guess and i need pictures!!! LOL

Great start and good luck on your adventure!!!

[helganog]

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What a brilliant looking site. Really simple but dead effective! Love the 'bot and the header on the main page looks really effective.
Just to confuse things I think the menu bar looks better hard up against the left margin. I'm not sure if this has changed as a result of centering - a bit past my newbie skills I'm afraid. I also think that the text on the main page is a bit small.
On the "About" page I would suggest you try to break the paragraphs up a bit smaller as it looks a bit daunting!
Other than that - congratulations...I'm jealous.

[bill2006]

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Much better, good work.
Changing the caps really helped too.
Is your page saved as http://www.virtuallaborforce.net/index.html or as http://www.virtuallaborforce.net . Reason I ask is that the address bar shows the former.

[Liwendyll]

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it is saved as index.html not sure why its showing up as just www.virtuallaborforce.net when ya first go there if ya click a link it shows as index.html is there a difference?

[Liwendyll]

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Heh and not sure what part ya saw but my most recent effort is with the buttons along the top and different header I thought it looked much more presentable and less cluttered looking that way dont ya think? The only last detail was if ya notice on the terms page at the bottom I put the links and copyright on the graphic as apposed to underneath it like the other pages

[bill2006]

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Looks good, I had not seen the menu on top.